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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
Your a really good friend I don't know how to explain our friendship your there for me bad and good times your there when my fake friends are being jerks we talk you always bring a smile onto my face even when I'm about to cry I can tell you anything you don't tell anyone I like that in a friend I always look forward to seeing you online then when you come online I smile even when I'm sick I some how talk to you if there was a forever then we could talk forever but in this world there is no forever I only wish there was a forever I try to hook you up with guys that I'd think you'd like some guys don't work out others are shy but they email you When we both die I'm sure we will find our way to each other we will be best friends forever that I can promise you I don't care if you like *N sync I don't care that your in love with a hockey player that wouldn't be a true friend I know when your mad I don't leave you alone I stay with you we talk about it or atleast try to talk to you but I would never leave you hanging like others we are best friends forever Your friend,  Minna |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, I LOVE this poem it has to be my favorite of yours. I know your friend must feel very appreciated when she reads this. It seems in life you can only have one true through thick and thin best friend. I hope someday I am as luck as you are and I find mine as you did. (this one is in my library now  )-- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Ski*Chick Member
since 2001-01-13
Posts 141Fitchburg, Mass, Usa |
we have been friends for about 5 years, we love to chat about everything. Even though my disability is deadly she wants to be friends until the end of our lifes. But just like in the poem I wrote in heaven I'm sure we will find each other. If you want to e-mail me you can, I can't tell you much about my disability cause it's hard to explain to people how it affects me. But on my webpage there are pictures of me and my friends. ~*~Minna~*~ It's hard seeing someone loving your ex, when it's your ex friend who's loving him. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Minna, I think this poem was very cute... it's great to have friends online, who we can simply talk to, no worries about anything else other than a meeting of the minds. The thoughts in this poem were very good and I am sure your friend will love it. On a technical note though, I think you have done a better job of creating formats or simple sylliblic evenness to your poetry. This one was almost a paragraph broken into lines. It's not a bad thing at all, the poem is beautiful, but I'm pointing that out because I have a reputation to maintain as the jerk who always finds something wrong with the best poetry.  You have a great heart, Minna. And your poetry shows it. ~Allan The sun was born, so it shall die. ~VNV Nation, "Further" |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I really liked this. I think it's great to be so close to somebody like that. Hope it continues for a life time.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
You did a really good job here. I have a friend similar to the one you're talking about online. It's good to have someone like that. Nice job. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
This was a great poem dedicated to your friend, i hope you show it to her. This is for my libary. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Minna, it's nice to know you care for this friend and vice versa Hey girl, we havent talked in a while hope to talk to you on aim again "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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