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Baby Forever. |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Girl I miss you, Even know I just spoke to you on the phone I long to kiss you, and hold you in my arms. Every single night I feel so alone, Cause my heart’s so empty when your gone. Baby forever,from now on I will always love you Baby together,for always In this moment for two Baby forever. Baby I feel you, Every second, every minute of every day know you feel me too, From now on till eternity. Trust me with every word I say, Cause I wanna love you my way. Nothing can tear us apart Though the road is long No one can break our hearts Cause our love is so strong Baby forever, from now on I will always love you Baby together, for always In this moment for two Baby forever. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Very sweet poem here. I hope all is well in your love life. Good luck. Nice poem.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Wow that was great. Very sweet, I think it'd make a good song. Good job   Bel |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
very sweet poem, i agree with bel, it would me a great song! hehe you have a lot of talent! -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yeah, I thought it was a song too.  Great job on this. I look forward to reading more of your work. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Great job! This is so sweet! Thank you for sharing --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Seems like a lot om members have been really romantic lately  good job keep it up "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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AsBurYAnGel Junior Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 14Virginia |
I think this would make a good song too. Its really sweet, good job. Hope to see more. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is a really sweet poem I agree. Until your next -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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