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Marshalzu

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since 2001-02-15

Posts 2681
Lurking

0 posted 2001-03-27 04:11 PM

Actions and words.

Sitting by the telephone,
Waiting for a call,
Listening for a reassuring tone,
I’m not going out at all,
I’m hoping for some good news,
I hope she’ll take me back,
Because I’m down and in the blues,
And I’ve been told my heart is black,
I’m sitting here and I can’t wait,
To here that telephone ring,
To rid me of this hate,
So I’ll embrace the joy it will bring,
I’m sitting by the telephone,
I’ve been waiting all this time,
Excuse me if I moan,
But I realise everything isn’t fine.

" War is peace,
Freedom is Slavery,
Ignorance is strength" - George Orwell "1984"

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-27 04:24 PM

Nicely done here. I only found a few spelling errors such as- here (hear), and realise (realize).
Anyhow I thought you did well on this one.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

keoni
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since 2000-10-16

Posts 850
Up in the mountains in the NFC

2 posted 2001-03-27 04:48 PM

I liked this poem alot. I wrote one like this called "Waiting by the Phone", it was one of my first posts. I can really relate to this poem.
Jon

"Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine

LoveBug

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since 2000-01-08

Posts 4697

3 posted 2001-03-27 04:54 PM

Such a sad poem! I can feel how forlorn you are, sitting and waiting for that call. Thanks for sharing.

"Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli

Allan Riverwood

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since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-28 03:44 PM

Waiting by the phone is never fun...
You described the situation well.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

5 posted 2001-03-28 04:36 PM

*sniff, sniff* So sad, so sad... I'm sorry that things are the way they are. I hope they get better

Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-04-06 03:33 PM

I know hoy you feel
not just the wait but also the uncertainty
be strong

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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