Teen Poetry #4 |
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starryeyed999 Junior Member
since 2001-03-05
Posts 35 |
I wish that my day would come, So I can be swept up and carried higher than the sun. Nothing makes sense, Nobody cares, I could disapper forever and not one person would shed a single tear. I may not succeed in all that I do, but when one little thing goes my way, I'll take it for granted and get carried away. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
People would care if you suddendly passed on. Don't be so negative. I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
don't worry things happen life is unfair we gotta live wit it [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-28-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, I would care... I don't know you very well but I read your poetry and I learn quite a bit about you. You seem like a sweet person who has a lot of emotion about her. Also, I do enjoy reading your poetry. But it was a good poem, had a lot of heart to it. Well done. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I think everyone here at Passions would care. Hence the name, Family of Friends... great job, on this though. Your poetry is always a joy to read. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You'll be surprised on how many people do actually care. Just open your eyes and you'll see "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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