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If I Told You I Still Love You
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If I Told You I Still Love You |
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lilangel77 New Member
since 2001-04-03
Posts 1CT |
If I told you I still loved you, I wonder what you'd say, would you simply kiss me, or would you walk away. Cause I really do still love you, I need you everyday, I need you more than you'll ever know, in each and every way. When you go away, I'm thinking of you still, it's my mind that you're on, it's my heart that you fill. Please don't kiss this chance goodbye, it may not come again, either tell me yes or no, don't say that we'll be friends. I can't just be your friend, it's more than that I need, there's something different when I look at you, not what a friend would see. Don't think that I'll get over you, that'll be nothing but a lie, don't assume that it won't work out, when you never even tried. Since I told you I still love, now what is it you'll do, will you turn your back on me, or will you love me too. "The essential sadness is to go through life without loving. But it would be almost equally sad to leave this world without ever telling those you lov [This message has been edited by lilangel77 (edited 04-03-2001).] |
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Ina Senior Member
since 2000-10-09
Posts 1236Quebec, Canada |
First of all welcome to passions! your gonna enjoy it here. great first post! hope to see more. regina a small cut is only the beggining of a life in pain |
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silvrduck Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 146 |
Welcome to Passions!  Excellent first post!! It's going headfirst into my library... I hope you post more!  Take care (and good luck!) ~Sarah *The hardest thing to do is watch the one you love, love somebody else.* |
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banburycross Senior Member
since 2001-03-27
Posts 946viginia |
Welcome to passions! great first post, i look forward to reading lots more. Sometimes, the things that go unsaid are the only things worth hearing. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Yo, forget all the welcome stuff! Thsi is a GREAT POEM! it's just so beautiful! I love it! thank you thank you thank you for posting it! No angels in heaven nor demons below the sea, could ever dissever my soul from the soul of the beautiful Annabel Lee |
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LoneWolf Member
since 2001-03-10
Posts 384IL |
great job on this poem, i loved it It's too bad I'm not as wonderful a person as people say I am, because the world could use a few people like that. |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
Welcome and great first post. I hope you can resolve these problems soon, cause wasting your time loving someone who doesn't return it really really hurts. Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Welcome to Passions! Very nicely done for your first post. I jope to read more from you in the future. So keep posting. --Marie It's true that we don't know what we've got until we lose it, but it's also true that we don't know what we've been missing until it arrives. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. Welcome to passions! I hope to read much more from you.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
WELCOME TO PASSIONS!!! Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you enjoy sharing as well as reading other works too. Happy reading and replying. pls check your email for a special message "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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