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Heavens Tears

Senior Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 677

0 posted 2001-03-19 03:17 PM

I hate having a poem with no title, so I am using Allans idea. Thanks

Time heals all wounds
That is what they say
But how are they so sure
I wonder everyday

Does it take more that time
Is there something I must do
It seems I will always live this way
That there will be nothing new

I wish that lifes surprises
Were full of joy and hope
Maybe if I could believe this
I would be able to cope

Sometimes I wish my life were gone
At least there would be no tears
I also wish I could trust someone
But getting hurt is one of my greatest fears

I hate having to live
With my own set boundaries
That I set to protect myself
Thinking I can live in ease

But my own solitary confinement
Only makes it harder to deal
With the memories I must carry
That help me to remeber its real

[This message has been edited by Wishing4U (edited 03-21-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-19 05:49 PM

NO idea for a title, but this poem was just fine. I liked it.

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Linc

Senior Member

since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

2 posted 2001-03-19 07:28 PM

Hey,
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I agree with him | its a great poem and I have a hard enough title with my own poems much less others

sorry I can't help. Until your next great poem

-- Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

3 posted 2001-03-20 01:13 PM

Hmmm... no idea for a title, but this is an excellent poem just the same. Keep posting and keep replying to other's poems. Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Allan Riverwood

Member Elite

since 2001-01-04

Posts 3502
Winnipeg

4 posted 2001-03-20 10:15 PM

Call it "time." I think it's pretty much what you are discussing in the poem, most of the time.
It was very good, too. Well done.

~Allan

If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort

xShUgArHiGhx

Member Elite

since 2000-09-26

Posts 3150
tRyIn tO fIt iN2 mY oWn ShoEs

5 posted 2001-03-23 05:38 PM

Yea it always seems like people are telling you to give it time...sometimes if i do it works but other times no amount of time can heal my wound...i guess it all depends on the circumstance. Excellent poem tho..very true...

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-03-30 04:30 PM

Time does heal, it might take longer for others, so stay strong. thanks for the wonderful read. keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

HappyPretender
Junior Member

since 2001-03-06

Posts 38
Prince George, VA

7 posted 2001-04-04 01:13 PM

Opening up is the best way to deal with it. Get it out and let go of the memories by talking with someone. But tell someone what you want for them first, to listen or talk. No one can read your mind.

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