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Teen Poetry #4

Angels in miniskirts...

Master
Senior Member

since 1999-08-18

Posts 1867
Boston, MA

0 posted 2001-03-26 06:21 PM

Angels in miniskirts behind the counters,--
in the stores of New York, the eye encounters
glimpses of after-life, though I still prefer
the comfort of home, present life, and her.

Forty days in the desserts of imagination,--
I wonder how long I’ll endure the temptation
of water or as the Devil, himself, proposed,--
the kingdom in which I can still repose.

I’m walking on water, -- the current of masses.
I’m weighing the drawbacks versus the assets
of drowning in life. I’m beginning to think
that I’m of the kind that simply don’t sink.

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-26 06:45 PM

Nicely done but I didn't feel this was as good as the others I've read from you.
Still I liked it....

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-26 07:10 PM

I liked this one a lot.. It was different from what I've seen from you in the past, but I still think it's very nicely written. Good job!

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

UnPumpkin
Junior Member

since 2001-03-25

Posts 18

3 posted 2001-03-26 10:54 PM

I think i just fell in love with you.

Or at least the magic in your words.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

4 posted 2001-04-06 10:36 AM

Bravo Master!!!
Again, you have amazed me with your talent
keep sharing

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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