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Teen Poetry #4

bad loving

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
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0 posted 2001-03-23 11:28 PM

I want to say I love you but I am scared,
For all the walls crashing down leaving me bear,
The price of love equels the price of death,
So I plunge in first with no regrets,

Walking alone in the empty street,
All I can do is stare and watch how things are so neat,
Watching how love blossems and blooms,
Only to end up dead and doomed,

Maybe it is not the same with every life,
But how should I tell with the lonely feeling the beckons tonight,
I never forgot a kiss or even a simple touch,
But that doesn't matter any more,

Wearing a mask to hide my pain,
Only opening up to one person before I go insane,
Waiting for me chance to be freeded by love,
But until then I am just like a used glove.

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

jytree
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since 2000-01-26

Posts 336
omaha ark usa

1 posted 2001-03-23 11:29 PM

sorry I posted it twice opps

Lead me not into temptation,
I can find the way there mysel

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-24 10:28 AM

This poem is great. I know what you mean about getting those three words out... great job on the poem.

--Marie

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