Teen Poetry #4 |
A haircut can ruin a thousand accomplishments |
sherm Member
since 2000-07-21
Posts 94Evansville,IN |
my backs been crushed and my spine smashed to dust i gave up i gave in and i let them win gathered up my values said to hell with these threw them out the window with such graceful ease i have no more pride left it on the other side im nothing but a fake a mold for them to make its amazing the way your accomplishments dont matter when a simple haircut makes them all stir so ill make everyone else happy change my hair maybe get a tan look like some backstreet boy so everyone can say what a nice young man Its better to be hated for who you are than loved for who you are not |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Naw, don't. Make your hair even funkier than before, but refine your manners and dress with your shirt tucked in. Then you will get your message across. Another good poem. Hope to see you posting more. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Naaaaaa don't conform to what others say about some hair. Good job in expressing yourself, keep the hair-do I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Trust me looking like a backstreet boy wont help ( I HATE them my friends call me Justin I think he is from one of them or OutaSync) Don't change.... -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
If you turn into a Backstreet Boy, I'll personally have to beat you down. I'm just kidding of course. Very good poem. I actually thought it was about a haircut when I clicked it. "The woods are lovely, dark, and deep |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
Well I am going to deliberately go against what everyone else said and say, Yes. Go and conform. Cut your hair and fit into that mould. Just kidding of course. Conformity is for those who have no direction. You do NOT want to look like someone from the Backstreet Boys alright. Do you know what happens to people like them?! Stick with what you have. This is where being unique comes into play. ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you really want to look like BSB you are who you are, you should accept that don't change yourself just to be accepted by others people should like you for who you are thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Nooooooo dooonn't dooo itttttt.....My motto: If you're you, then you're cool. Sho be you! Deal? Aiight!! Peace! ~Carly "The eye sees a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination awake." |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Never change for anyone. change for no one, respect everyone - until they give you a reason not to, and be a fearless zealot to expression. "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
I thought I replied to this one.. I guess not. This was a good poem, but I don't think you should change for anyone but yourself. Good job on the poem. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I thought I replied already too! Yup, they said it. And you did a really good job on this poem!! "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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