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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I want to say I love you but I am scared, For all the walls crashing down leaving me bear, The price of love equels the price of death, So I plunge in first with no regrets, Walking alone in the empty street, All I can do is stare and watch how things are so neat, Watching how love blossems and blooms, Only to end up dead and doomed, Maybe it is not the same with every life, But how should I tell with the lonely feeling the beckons tonight, I never forgot a kiss or even a simple touch, But that doesn't matter any more, Wearing a mask to hide my pain, Only opening up to one person before I go insane, Waiting for me chance to be freeded by love, But until then I am just like a used glove. Lead me not into temptation, |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Good job on this one, Jay. I could see what you were saying quite clearly. You ended it very well, wrapped it all up perfectly.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
This is truely something to admire. The serenity of love and often lead to disputes in reality. My head or my heart. A dificult choice. |
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jytree Member
since 2000-01-26
Posts 336omaha ark usa |
I just thought I would tell everyone how I feel lately about love it just feels that I can only look at others and just sit in my corner it gets old very quickly some days Lead me not into temptation, |
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LoveBug
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since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
Observation of love can be exceedingly depressing, although you describe these observations well. Although love may bloom and fade, don't forget that it DOES bloom. Thanks for sharing.  "Men judge generally more by the eye than by the hand, for everyone can see and few can feel."-Machiavelli |
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~sugarpie313~ Member
since 2000-09-14
Posts 375Maine, USA |
i can relate to what your saying VERY well. I just got out of a relationship and i feel this way but even in the relationship i felt this way too. Keep your chin up. Things happen for the best... Valerie *Life can take your dreams and turn them upside down, Friends will talk about you when you're not around, but don't ever lose that light in your eyes* |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here jytree. I thought you wrote this well!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
When we show our love for someone doesn't it feel like we're gambling our feelings? Scarry ain't it. But we'll never know if it's mutual if we dont express it. "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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