Teen Poetry #4 |
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my love is true. |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne ![]() |
tonights the night out love will grow weve got all the time,lets take it slow deep inside my heart you'll find a key to discover the secrets within me. for you know that my love is true and all that i think of is you for all the moments we have shared i have treasured every moment beyond compare. our love stands great and tall cos love is the power greatest of all. |
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Fading Away![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
"deep inside my heart you'll find a key to discover the secrets within me." This is a really well-written poem. It's beautiful, and sweet! I think maybe you should give this to the person you wrote it about? Just a suggestion ![]() Also, a reminder... this is your third poem for the day. Be careful, you wouldn't them closed for posting more than 3 ![]() Great job on the poem. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
i cant give it to him... its a certain someone that submits poems in here and he doesnt love me anymore so im too scared to give it to him |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
this was a lovely poem! i bet if u gave it to him he couldn't help but love you! its gorgeous! ![]() Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
i cant [This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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anonymous albert ?![]()
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
ur poems r really great today ![]() |
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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne |
its about tom gorman my b/f who i love dearly [This message has been edited by princess^sarah (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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AngelShell Member
since 2000-03-01
Posts 446not heaven nor hell so... |
You're just a sonnet waiting to happen. Very real. |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
The ending of this was really great, nice job on the poem! "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nicely done here. I agree with your perception on just how powerful love truly is. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Wonderful post, I think youve shown really how much you do care for this person. keep it up and keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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