Teen Poetry #4 |
Silent Serenity |
fozzyozzy Member
since 2001-03-15
Posts 336Lessburg Virginia |
Silent Serenity What can you hear When the world turns deaf Serenity A sweet silence For my piece of mind It hurts too much to see you It hurts too much to scream But take a breath Sigh I'll let my thoughts roam Imagine myself in a coma To transcend like Emerson Yet not transparent eye can see Appreciate the silence to be Inspired Hesitant for a breath Sigh I cannot disturb What is stronger than me This sweet silent serenity. "The heart can think of no devotion |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Wow, 0 posts on page 2? This poem is great! The style is perfect. Nice job yet again! --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
It was ok. Mediocre for you, man. Doesn't it suck being amazing? I know how it is to hear "not your best," but just let it serve to reinforce the ones that I did like. So to this I say Not your best! ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
n [This message has been edited by anonymous albert ? (edited 03-25-2001).] |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
On the other hand, Albert makes a valid argument. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great poem fozzy. I liked this one a lot! I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Not your best that I've read, but still an amazing read. thanks for sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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