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princess^sarah Member
since 2001-01-12
Posts 131melbourne 
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why did he do it? you hear people ask was it his choice or was it his task? He must have been sad or really depressed he must have been worried or feeling real stressed. No-one will know what went on in his mind no-one will know what he was like inside no-one will know what was needed to prevent him comitting suacide. so anyone out there whos lost someone they love dont think its your fault that your friend now, watches you from above. |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Oh, wow. This is sad. I once had a good friend lose another friend over suicide. That's got to be hard. Great poem, I like the rhyme scheme. Nice job. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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luvnkris Member
since 2000-08-31
Posts 144Perth, Australia |
Great poem! suicide sux majorly, i know a few ppl who have been involved with sucidal ppl, and 1 of my old close friends tried it several times! its not good! thanks for the poem! Luv Jo xoxo * never live a second without being grateful for all you have around you* |
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anonymous albert ?
since 2001-03-23
Posts 2979 |
luv the poem  i 2 once losted a friend back in the early days well.... not really like couple years ago anyways that poem gave back regretful feelings keep writin |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
I lost a friend to suicide....wow, I can't believe how much it still hurts to think of it. Good poem though, and it's going into my library, because...well I don't know. Thank you though "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, a lovely poem... And I don't think it is my fault... I think it is THEIR fault... I'll say no more than this. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I've never been involved with anything like this so I know I can't even imagine how it feels. Good job on the poem though! "Be kind, for everyone you meet is fighting a hard battle" "Life's short. If you don't look around once in a while you might miss it." BothUnknown [This message has been edited by Lakewalker (edited 03-24-2001).] |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Nice tribute to your friend. my condolences. I hope everything is ok there.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
Good message Sarah Though it would be nice to prevent these kind of situations Your friends actions is never a valid option It never was and never will be "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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