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Heavens Tears
since 2001-03-15
Posts 677
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I really thought That it was real But now I see That I was blind To everything I didnt want to see And even though It never really ended It more of just stopped And I wonder which is worse Still not knowing What could have been Had it not ended On and unhappy note My anger would have ended And all could have been well Had we not been torn apart By forces we didnt control Now I regret Every moment we lost That we never again will gain I dont know That my heart is ready for it That I can handle more tears But I always will wonder And I mention it to no one For it will always be My little secret From them all This is to the one guy I thought I loved, but whether or not it was real, I will never know, b/c of the pain that Im scared to feel again... |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Aww, that's so sad! I hope you're ok "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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lilpoet Member
since 2000-12-30
Posts 55Dallas,Tx |
hey this was really good. i think i know what you're going through. my boyfriend broke up with me thursday and we had been going out 9 months. it was the worst thing i have ever expercienced...and the pain was so horrible i couldn't explain. it still is horrible. but always know, that god never gives you anything you can't handle. that's what my sister told me and she's right. things will always turn out for the best. trust me. if you ever need to talk just e-mail me. ~If I had a star for everytime you made me smile, I'd be holding the entire midnight sky in my hands~ |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, This is really good I enjoyed reading. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked this one. It's kind of sad that your fears of expressing yourself as a whole is what is crushing your chances of becoming whole. Don't you think you should give it a chance? For me, speaking for all the hopeless romantics out there, Love is all reigning and all powerful. To deny love is to deny yourself.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
As usual, I disagree with Javier.  If it hurt you the first time, then don't be afraid to let it go. I would personally not try to dwell on one person so much. We are, as humans, capable of falling in love more than once. So move on. Good poem, by the way.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
"Every moment we lost That we never again will gain" I love these lines I'm not here to give you advice everyone else is gonna do that yes, your poems are good they're actually very expressive thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Fading Away
since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
Great job on this one. You do write very expressive poetry. I enjoy reading them. Thank you for sharing. Keep posting. --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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