Teen Poetry #4 |
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If you Read the Stars |
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Hallucination Member
since 2001-03-18
Posts 419 |
Time's been standing still, since the day I let you go. And since that second, the sun has never shown, night and day had become one. I try to forget but a memory can't be lost. I can't turn the lights down low, and I have paid the ultimate prize. I want you back no matter what it cost Looking back on the times we shared together, and now you're just a vision in my dream. If you read the stars, they say I'll love you forever. I have been waiting, for this moment for a long time. Since the door closed, and I cut the line, still you're always on my mind. In my every dream I'm holding you in my arms. Can't see you standing in the light, so I have paid the ultimate prize. I want to feel the love of your charm. And now I'm starting to lose my faith, every mirror that I look in I see your face. But than it just suddenly fade away, Oh, how I wish if you had stayed. Looking back on the times we shared together, and now you're just a vision in my dream. If you read the stars, they say I'll love you forever. |
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since 2001-03-14
Posts 3131Lynchburg, Virginia |
This is so beautiful, I can't believe no one has replied yet! Great job.. I love the imagery. Maybe you should give this to the person you were talking about? ![]() --Marie I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am. |
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
This is quite sad. I thought you wrote this very nicedly and I look forward to more. ![]() I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. |
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anonymousfemale Member Elite
since 2000-02-02
Posts 2797Limbo |
This is so sad yet so sweet at the same time. I didn't really like the format but each to their own. ![]() I hope to see more posts and replies soon. ![]() ~AF~ "It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory." |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Wow, you are incredible you know that? Watch out Master, got a rival here in my opinion, but time always tells doesn't it?... "Some men see things as they are and say why. |
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Linc![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
AWWW how nice. Keep up the good work. -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is the second one today of yours that I've read And both reactions are the same after reading You have some serious talent my friend very romantic poem keep posting "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, |
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Pixie-Babe03 Member
since 2000-08-29
Posts 387Central Maine |
this is incredible! so sad though. great work! i look forward to more -=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=- |
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