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Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

0 posted 2001-03-19 04:25 PM

You can’t see the tears
That are flowing from my eye
You can’t hear the tears in my voice
When I try to tell them what’s wrong
You don’t know how bad this hurts
You’ll just never know
You may never see my face again
You may never hold me again
I loved you but you blew it
And you only get one chance with Kiara

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

[This message has been edited by Tamma (edited 03-19-2001).]

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-19 05:48 PM

This is sad.......how many poems do you have in your series tamma?

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

Isabel Galaxia
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since 2000-06-18

Posts 733

2 posted 2001-03-19 06:33 PM

This is great, but sad. I hope things get better for you
Bel

Linc

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since 2001-03-07

Posts 552
The Backstreet Boy

3 posted 2001-03-19 06:39 PM

Hey,

This poem is kinda sad but well done. Keep up the good work.
--Linc

"Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment."

Tamma

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since 2000-01-17

Posts 794
In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV

4 posted 2001-03-19 06:43 PM

To be honest, I don't really know....I jsut post them as I write them.

I guess we'll see when I get tired of writing

i dont know if i should cry because its over, or smile because it happened

Allysa

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since 1999-11-09

Posts 1952
In an upside-down garden

5 posted 2001-03-20 08:26 AM

What's up girl? I sense a story behind this poem. Some guys are jerks, but you just gotta believe that if it was meant to be, it was meant to be. I know I sound like I'm living in fairy tale land, but there's nothing else to believe in. Ya know? Plus, there are some nice guys out there. Take for example, Dopey, Acire, Allan, Lakewalker, Linc, and many more. And if they're here, then there's more out there, some where. I just can't seem to find any, yet. Byes.!

I wish people would stop telling me that I can do anything I want to. I never thought that I couldn't.

Life is what happens when you're making ot

Fading Away

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since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

6 posted 2001-03-20 09:55 AM

"You can’t see the tears
That are flowing from my eye
You can’t hear the tears in my voice
When I try to tell them what’s wrong"

That's beautiful, but sad. Are you OK? I hope so. If not, then I hope things only get better from here, because you don't deserve to hurt. Great poem. Thanks for read.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

7 posted 2001-03-25 05:34 PM

Tamma, this is really sad
Hope the next one is happier
can't wait to read it
I know, i'm a little delayed, but I'm reading every poem in the forum

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

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