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Hallucination
Member

since 2001-03-18

Posts 419

0 posted 2001-03-18 06:58 PM

I keep thinking about that day
when we said goodbye and you walked away,
you stepped out the door
and I've never seen you since.
After all these months your picture is starting
to fade away,
but Still you hold my heart in your hand
and i just can't understand
why I can't be with you night after night.

I love you
from the bottom of my heart
and after all these years,
after all these tears
I know I still love you.
and I hope you feel the same
because I'll know we'll meet again
I love you.

Every word I say straight from the heart
together with you is where I want to share my love,
I looked into your eyes
never ever seen anything so beautiful.
And every momeery that I've got of you
keeps m alive,
still everynight I think of you and cry
cause I just don't know why
I can't hold your hand close to my heart.

I love you,
you're the key to my life
and after all these nights,
after all these sights
I know I still love you
and I hope you feel the same
because someday we'll meet again
I love you

Dopey Dope

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Member Patricius

since 2000-08-30

Posts 11132
San Juan, Puerto Rico

1 posted 2001-03-18 08:10 PM

Welcome to Passions! I thought this poem was so sweet! We're very happy that you have decided to join our wonderful poetic community. We look forward to your sharing your efforts with us, and we expect you'll enjoy the work of others as well.(Please check your e-mail for a special greeting)

-Dopey/Passions in Poetry-

I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I'm in love with my shadow
I admire it daily

fozzyozzy
Member

since 2001-03-15

Posts 336
Lessburg Virginia

2 posted 2001-03-18 09:52 PM

Definitely a welcome addition to Passion though I have to say I like your other ones better.

"The woods are lovely, dark, and deep
But I have promises to keep
And miles to go before I sleep
And miles to go before I sleep"
-Robert Frost

anonymousfemale
Member Elite

since 2000-02-02

Posts 2797
Limbo

3 posted 2001-03-19 11:41 AM

Welcome to passions!!

I did prefer your other poems too but this is a nice little entry into Passions.

~AF~

"It is not necessary to change. Survival is not mandatory."
-W. Edwards Deming

Fading Away

Member Elite

since 2001-03-14

Posts 3131
Lynchburg, Virginia

4 posted 2001-03-19 11:43 AM

WELCOME TO PASSIONS

Great poem to start out here. I hope you stay for a long time. Good job.

--Marie

I never thought that you would ever be the one to let me down. I guess that just goes to show how wrong I always am.

Elvenblood
Member

since 2001-02-17

Posts 409
Maine, USA

5 posted 2001-03-19 04:47 PM

Awww, that's so sweet and sad! Wow, that's a great work of art there, thanks for posting here, I know there are more ont he boards, I'll see them soon.

"Some men see things as they are and say why.
I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK

Acies

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Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-07

Posts 7665
Twilight Zone

6 posted 2001-03-25 05:49 PM

Welcome To Passions!!!

Nice to see you've decided to join our family here in Passions for Poetry. Hope you do enjoy reading as well as sharing your own poems.

"So long as men can breathe or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S.

[This message has been edited by acire (edited 03-25-2001).]

Pixie-Babe03
Member

since 2000-08-29

Posts 387
Central Maine

7 posted 2001-03-25 08:52 PM

this is wonderful! full of emotion, hope to see many more

-=Love starts with a SMILE, grows with a KISS, and ends with a TEAR=-