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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
~hey u guys hope this is aight and doesnt suck too bad  ~I wish… I wish for a lot of things Though they never come true I wish for too many things I wish I knew I shouldn’t wish Wishes never come true Never say never But you never knew You didn’t see what I saw And you didn’t even care You had time for everyone else But me, you could never bare I brought back too many memories Or so you said I wish on a star And pray beside my bed That you will notice And make a little time for me I have something to say And then I would let you be But I see you in school And you walk by without even a glance I can’t bare this any longer Please give me a chance But I know you, You’ll let me stay blue Still, sometimes I wish But wishes never come true "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Kandi Member
since 2000-06-14
Posts 354North of Hell |
Wow...this was just an awesome poem! I like the repetition of the "wishes never come true" line. Sadly, I can relate to this. A very powerful read. ~K~ ~*Won't you come and hold my hand? This world has taken me as far as it can... without your smile.~* ~*If I never said I'm sorry, then I'm wrong, |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
thanks for replying...unfortunately too many ppl can relate!!  thanks for taking the time  ~etheL~"i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Isabel Galaxia Senior Member
since 2000-06-18
Posts 733 |
Dang chica!! u r quite the poet  . Are any of these really based on ur life? Good job! Bel |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
hey kT um naw these arent based on life thingys they just come out of my head i think...hard to imagine huh? haha! thanks for reading! i luv craigs to u!!!  its so sweet!~ethel~  "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Angel Bee Member
since 2001-01-30
Posts 176Virginia |
This was a cute poem. keep writing. :o) -angel bee- |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Not hard to imagine. I liked it... very nice take on the concept of wishes. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Great job here. I liked the style of the poem.....the ryhme scheme was quite well done. I thought this had a bit of a punch in it since it was very diff. from what I'm used to reading on here. I liked it.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
thanks for taking the time to read it! yeah i always end up making a statement to be different...haha ~ETHEL~ "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
wishes do come true ethel the thing is you have to make it come true it means, you have to work on it too you can't just wish and let it be now, wish and it'll come true "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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