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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
~ok guys (and gals) i put this together using the magnetic poetry so...its a lil strange...but try to read between the lines ok? thanks~ *Magic Is The Hand Er Light* special mountain will quiet there king with slow cow understands turtle which answered she flew important moon pretend like funny boy hide happy night, draw peace cried spring wet sea dream something, NO, remember whisper, down up, who think where believe snow, or sun will be the mirror blue of pink, easy castle walk, ride, seee many wonder laugh wild rain was hot inside all we imagine the star my prince boy and i *"J" Or Black Elephant Talking Hat* ~ok guys now i know how weird this really sounds... but oh wel i know what im talking about!!~ hehe~ "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Angel in Flight Member
since 2001-01-07
Posts 381 |
lol this was GREAT!!! It may sound a bit wierd but it was well done with the words given to you. The law of harvest is to reap more than you sow.Sow a habit and you reap a character.Sow a character and you reap a destiny |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
hahahaha  thanks so much for taking the time to read it!!!!  it was VERY strange  ~ethel~  "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I liked the sun being the mirror part. I thought this was cool.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Hey, are you talking about that little book of magnets called "magnetic poetry?" I got that for x-mas once and just put it away, never even opened it. It looked stupid. But when I read this, I think I may have been wrong! It's like a restriction-- writing with a word bank. Perhaps I'll dust off and open this magnetic poetry book. Excellently done. I loved the "NO" in the middle of nowhere... made me laugh. This poem is a lot of fun. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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ethel lahootie Member
since 2001-03-06
Posts 143SC, USA |
thanks yall dopey~believe it or not that was my fave part 2! haha allan~thanks alot! im glad i mite have inspired you!! hehe  ~ETHEL~ "i remember running through the wet grass falling a step behind both of us never tiring desperatly wanting" ~better than ezra...desperatly wanting |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I'm lost....help  "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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