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For all Poets!! Lost in a Dream
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For all Poets!! Lost in a Dream |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV 
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Sorry for anyone I left out...these are the ones I know, the ones that ALWAYs reply to my posts...Yanno the names I see most often I wake up in a strange new place I look around and know exactly where I am I’m stuck in Teens #4 @ Passions Somehow, it’s not what I expected Out on the hill, I see Dopey and Jeremy Chasing each other on trikes Alwye, LoveBug, and Kit McCallum Are all having a “moderator meeting” DancinQueen and San are discussing The sad events that have unfolded in the forums Lakewalker is trying to teach Melz Just how to walk out on MY lake GirlsBestFriend seems to be out In Laa-Laa land somewhere Jenn is trying to talk Allan into Playing a game of truth-or-dare Carly and acire are trying to Walk down the waterfall Jon and DragonFang are at the bottom Searching for a lost contact www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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jeremydraul Senior Member
since 2000-08-01
Posts 1118State of Despair |
This is definately my favorite poem about this forum, ever! Your such a sweetheart for posting this... Im sure everyone will absolutely love it! Im so glad I read this one... good job! ~JDR |
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keoni Senior Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 850Up in the mountains in the NFC |
This is a great one about our forum. Keep 'em coming! Jon "Your anger is a gift"-Rage Against The Machine |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
hehehe... SHE wouldn't have to try too hard to get me into a game...  Great poem, I've thought of doing one like this, but it never really came to me... Nice! I like! Eternal life without the darkness isn't life at all- it is a lobotomy. |
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LoveBug
Moderator
Member Elite
since 2000-01-08
Posts 4697 |
LOL... this CAN be a crazy place, can't it? You describe it well. Cute piece!  Thanks for sticking me in there somewhere! "Where there is great love there are always miracles" -Cather "Love heals everything, and love is all there is"- Zukav |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Great poem and wonderful imagery ... I could picture it perfectly Tamma! I really enjoyed this, nicely done! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Dopey Dope
Moderator
Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Naturally *I* was the first poet mentioned *bows*.... NOBODY CAN CATCH ME ON MY TRIKE! *speeds off* ZOOOOOOOOOOOOooooooooooom!!!!  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Acies
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
you just put a smile on my face thanks i love the idea of the poem great job Tamma I see no changes, wake up in the morning I ask myself, "Is life worth living or should I blast myself" TUPAC SHAKUR |
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Child of the Stars
since 2000-09-07
Posts 1658Ann Arbor, MI |
Awwww Tamma this was sooo sweet!! I really loved it, thanks for posting it!! ~Carly inspiration of my art search for light out of the dark all the pictures in my heart lie awake there in my fog... |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
Oh, how cute!! I was gonna be all sad if I was left out... but I was there hehehe. Allan, I wouldn't have to try so hard, huh? Why is that, you crazy guy??? You like the dare part, don'tcha? J/k This was really cute!! xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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Morouxshi San Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 207San Juan, Puerto Rico |
very original tamma! i really liked this (im in it) it would be weird if it was an actual dream though. San, the wise San, the dumb San, the guy... |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
Nice job on this, that would be a really scary dream oh, and I think you hit Dopey's part perfectly  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Lakewalker http://www.thehungersite.com |
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Tamma
since 2000-01-17
Posts 794In His Arms, Harpers Ferry, WV |
Anybody found my contact yet? www.angelfire.com/wv2/poetrycorner I'm just a girl looking at a guy asking him to love me |
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Jenn Cirrincione
since 2000-07-02
Posts 2107Fl |
hehe cute.... No I think you may wish to send out for a new pair. xoxo Jenn "A person can never get over a broken heart if they aren't willing to let go of all of the pieces."-- ?? |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
i enjoyed the read BTTP this goes |
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Linc
since 2001-03-07
Posts 552The Backstreet Boy |
Hey, Aww how nice :'( so...nice. Until your next poem -- Linc "Once you reach your original goal it seems that the journey was your real accomplishment." |
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