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Letter of hate.
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Letter of hate. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Letter of hate. Letters to a maiden, i'm a damsel in distress my fear is overidden my tears are just suppressed, I'm living in a dream and she's the only thing that's real i'm being torn at the seam demons snapping at my heel shes destroying my whole world and i'm loving every bit the dark banners are unfurled and the braziers are lit shes lighting up the dark that is mean't to be my life she's left me with a mark and it's replacing all my strife i'm waiting for the silence to deafen all their ears I'm looking to the violence to brings their eyes to tears their gonna pay for me and I'm gonna make them pay and when I set them free there gonna want to stay hate me or love me that's their only choice die or they can follow me and i'll be their single voice. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
I thought this was great. I liked this a lot and think you are a great writer.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
I will agree... I see a similarity in the titles of two of your posts here. Letters? Some sort of series? Very interesting. And this was magnificent, as always, Marshal. Keep posting for us. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
I like your style of short lines It gives the poem it's own personality thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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