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katherine Member
since 2000-06-10
Posts 365Canberra Australia |
I want you to be mine I need you here with me I hate it when you're gone But i don't always want to be with you I never want you to go i hate the way you make me need you I hate the way i know i need you I hate what you did to her and the way it effected me Through all of this i need you to make me feel the way you do. |
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Elvenblood Member
since 2001-02-17
Posts 409Maine, USA |
Oh, I hope he, or someone, is always there for you! THis is also a really good piece! And its going into my library "Some men see things as they are and say why. I dream things that never were and say why not." ~RFK |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
The best poetry always comes from the heart and I can tell you I felt as though I could hear you heart beating, Great stuff... Must be a very special person. Marshal Zu |
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Marshalzu
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking |
This must be a really special guy, great poem, love to see more of your work. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Me? you=me Nice poem. Short, sweet, to the point. Nicely expressed.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
*coughs at Javier* Ignore him.  This poem was quite good. I see the emotions you displayed here, they are quite clear. Great job. ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
You've shown your feelings clearly And shown such strong emotions great write thanks for the read "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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