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Letter of Jealousy.
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Letter of Jealousy. |
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Marshalzu  
since 2001-02-15
Posts 2681Lurking 
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Letter of Jealousy. I'm swallowed by these feelings I'm feeling so consumed all these things leave me reeling and I consider the assumed I question every momement examine every word I'm feeling such a torment I wonder what I heard I'm jealous of your absense and it leaves me full of hate and in this present tense I just sit and contemplate it seems that i'm a loser and i've lost out in ths game i'm a serial abuser but I cannot bare the fame. Friendship may end in love but love in friendship never. |
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Dopey Dope
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Member Patricius
since 2000-08-30
Posts 11132San Juan, Puerto Rico |
Serial abuser.........wow that line was awesome. I liked it tons. Wonderful job here.  I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust. I'm in love with my shadow I admire it daily |
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Allan Riverwood
since 2001-01-04
Posts 3502Winnipeg |
Yes, that one got me as well. I hate to be unoriginal in a reply though...  I'd like to say the flow of these letters was nice. The fact that they are "letters" are interesting... this aspect of the poem makes it seem more personal, like something between two people. Very excellent job. I await more letters.  ~Allan If I had your eyes, I'd be blind. For I can only see out of my own. ~~Carly Van Dort |
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Acies
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Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-07
Posts 7665Twilight Zone |
This is probably one of your best poems that I've read. You have shown your sentiments in a really good way. Keep sharing "So long as men can breathe or eyes can see, So long lives this, and this give life to thee." W.S. |
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