Open Poetry #12 |
Melting into Angels Arms |
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Melted into Angels Arms When I was lying next to you and looking into your eyes I realized this man has never seen anyone more beautiful my whole life. Your eyes were so intense. Your nose is my desire. Your smile so sweet. Your lips burn on fire. My sweet you were like an angel lying there. A little piece of heaven with beauty from heaven to share. I found myself surrendering to your charms. Bathed in your beauty as I melted into those angel arms. Her eyes so intense. Her nose my desire. A smile so sweet as our eyes meet. My lips to share that fire. Jameslee@January24,2001 ForMySweetMichelle onChineseNewYear [This message has been edited by jmlee12345 (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a tender rendering of love...this is so touching...loved the repetition of key lines with that final twist too.... This is very touching. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely james..hope she is the one ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Very romantic! Michelle is a very lucky girl, James, may you always melt with in her arms and may true love forever blossom in you! (sigh) Very lovely! You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
I enjoyed this love poem very much, James. And I also hope and wish the best for you. Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you serenity, Victoria, Noah and Koko for the lovely remarks...James |
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Poet deVine
Administrator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-26
Posts 22612Hurricane Alley |
*sigh....Michelle is such a lucky girl...this is beautiful. Happy Chinese New Year! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you so much PoetDeVine...James |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
It sure is refreshing to see so much feeling expressed for another. Im sure she`s a very lucky girl to have one who thinks so highly of her. Very Nice and God Bless you both. Mr.Magoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Mr. Magoo for your kind words...James |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
James, you really know how to make the words sing my friend. . . --------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Thank you Sven...James |
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