Open Poetry #12 |
KFC Senyru |
Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
KFC Senryu Hey, shiny black bird sitting on that crooked limb how would you taste fried Snow 4-23-00 "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
ha-ha-ha-hee-hee-hee Kentucky Fried Chickadee!! Snow, you are so MEEEEEEEEAN! Love it! Absolutely! LOL |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
VAS.. lol!!! this came about because I spent Easter Sunday with my two children at the park..and there was this huge black bird sitting in the tree near our table just staring at the fried chicken like it was a relative.. *laughing* and it was giving me the *evil eye* So this piece popped in my head and I wrote it down on the box the chicken was in... my kids enjoyed it ;-) I'm glad you did also ;-) snow "...I am a river in winter, quiet in the eyes of most but deep, swift and full of life to one, lucky enough to fall through the ice. |
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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore |
how evil... |
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kcsgrandma Senior Member
since 2000-09-24
Posts 1522Presque Isle, ME |
Is this what you would call eating crow?? Cute one. To love another person is to see the face of God. - Les Miserables Marilyn |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Clever! LOL! I'm hungry now... here, birdie, birdie...hehe Take care, Melissa |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Well stone the flamin' crows what a clever piece. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Snow
since 2000-10-16
Posts 1170desert flower looking for rain |
your replies made me smile as much as I did the day this was written.. thank you all so very much! snow |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Mmm, sounds good! Cute senryu. |
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Wolf777 Junior Member
since 2001-02-28
Posts 20 |
I love your sense of humor! This is great! |
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muted
since 2004-01-15
Posts 2949Elapsing, Eclipsing, Evolving |
*giggle* |
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