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Blue Eyes Dreaming
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Blue Eyes Dreaming |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London 
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Blue Eyes Dreaming ~~~ Not far it was from Heaven 'twas the very month of June And the sweetest birds were singing when first she stole my tune As if from out the bluest sky an angel came to call Quintessential to Irish memory with braids as I recall ~ The golden sun's shine o'er the dew reflected through her eyes like flowers from a woodland path her smile just mesmerized With dancers wings she stepped along my song held in her arms My blue eyes dreaming hypnotized now locked within her charms ~ "Good day kind sir" sweet melody ... embraced my very soul With butterflies and rubber thighs my tongue I swear it swoll My heart stood tall to brace my jaw an lock the molars tight The best I managed was a smile my voice had taken flight ~ Pausing she locked her gaze to mine reached out to my lapel Placed a fragrant flower there bent close to share its smell The moment stole my breath from me I gazed in pure delight Enchanted with her beauty rare Awoke ... to silent night ~~~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
supercalifragilisticexpialadocious there's not one thing in this poem that one could say's atrocious Kind sir I liked very much, it's really quite well done! I think that you and I and more will surely have our fun. This is so delightful Rex, superb. I love the 'tongue swoll' phrase and the fact that she's wearing braids. You are a hit and so is your poetry! |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Beautiful dream, Rex!! Lovely!! Denise |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Virginia ... you're making my head swell thankyou  Denise ... you're always so kind thankyou |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
What a sweet dream you have written here Rex...thanks for letting me peek We all have wings...some of us don't know why |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
(sigh) Oh, I love dreams so very very much, thank you for sharing your sweet, lovely dream. Dreaming is my favorite part of day. You have such a beautiful heart, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Paula and Noah ... thankyou both for reading and for your kind replies |
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Elizabeth
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Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
An enchanting dream, as well as an enchanting poem. |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Rex the imagery is beautiful! The whole thing is very enchanting! Liked this one VERY much! |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
Aww, too bad. But dreams do come true. Melton |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thankyou very much Elizabeth Thankyou Rebecca ... Always happy to enchant a reader ... Glad you liked it Melton ... I think this one did come true ... to be sure Thankyou |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Apparently not enough hours even in my day to catch all of the good poetry that sifts and shifts its way through these pages, so I thank the poet that popped this back up, just for me to read.... enjoyed immensely, Rex...you cast such images.... |
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Irie Senior Member
since 1999-12-01
Posts 1493Washington State |
~~*Irie claps hands excitedly*~  Rex, I adore it! I love everything about this piece. This one is going into my library! ~Sheri "The things that come to those that wait may be the things left by those who got there first" [This message has been edited by Irie (edited 02-23-2001).] |
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Voiceless Senior Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 686Under the stars upon the wind |
A but beautiful dream.. ~*Peachy Be*~ |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Thanks Sunshine ... yes ... I did send it back up just for you  Irie ... you are a treasure ... thanks Voiceless ... thankyou |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
This is great Rex Really enjoyed reading this poem |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Just read this again and enjoyed it as if were brand new to my eyes. May I take a copy? I mean, it is so original/unique that even a rerun/reread feels like the first time through. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Very nice Rex...James |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
insect ... you've been a busy little bug ... digging this one out of the pile Thankyou Virginia ... you just help yourself to a copy of anything I write ... and I'm giving free (((hugs))) along with them Thankyou James ... glad to hear from you [This message has been edited by Rex Allen McCoy (edited 03-09-2001).] |
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