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Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

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Listening to every heart

0 posted 2001-03-04 07:42 PM

In Quiet Regard

thoughts slowly transfer
reaching across sands
wisping on winds of time
clasping ethereal hands

time winds us in

Balladeer

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since 1999-06-05

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Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA

1 posted 2001-03-04 07:45 PM

simple and eloquent.....pure sunshine..

Sunshine

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

2 posted 2001-03-04 07:50 PM

Thank you 'Deer...I thought...almost too plain....

Voiceless
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since 2001-02-19

Posts 686
Under the stars upon the wind

3 posted 2001-03-04 07:58 PM

so simple and yet so interesting..
Very good!

~*Peachy Be*~

Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

4 posted 2001-03-04 08:23 PM

Sheer golden union
United hands spinning time,
Nature's inner Sun

Perfect...beautifully penned.

Poeminister

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Meadowmuse
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since 1999-12-27

Posts 3263

5 posted 2001-03-04 08:26 PM

A thoughtful, evocative composition, Sunshine.

Claire

Could a greater miracle take place than for us to look through each other's eyes for an instant?......Henry David Thoreau

Martie

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since 1999-09-21

Posts 28049
California

6 posted 2001-03-04 08:37 PM

Karilea...I have been thinking of time today and, yes it does.

Sunshine

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Listening to every heart

7 posted 2001-03-05 11:25 AM

Voiceless, thank you for the good...

Poeminister...certainly, not "perfect"...but maybe a close second...thank you...

Claire, I do like the word evocative...thank you...

Martie, it does, indeed...thank you for listening...

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

8 posted 2001-03-09 05:24 PM

beautiful, just beautiful....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2001-03-09 05:28 PM

I really love this..am saving it..*s

~Wynter

"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II

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