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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California 
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It is Roll it around on your tongue this marble this cold color warm it with breath and let it out It is a word Whisper and it rolls across the world opening a path Hear the sound the torched song the letter the engraved heart on stone listen It is poetry |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Martie... there is poetry, and then there is Martiesque poetry. you are one of a kind, and your talent to pen is always a joy to experience. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Martie~ I just have to thank the good Lord for you. The way you embrace your talent is so remarkable. Yes ... this IS poetry ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Now just wait a minute Sis... I read this o'er and o'er again... and you know something..? It was so short I could swear you left out something... Where's the rest of the story..? brother dale |
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Martie
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since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--your talent to make me smile is one of a kind. Marge--This is the best embrace---Hug!! Dale--If you read it three times...then it was much longer, right...you're a great brother! |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Another treat from PoetFriend Martie... Thank you sweetie for I enjoyed this read... *~coco~* [This message has been edited by CocoBaci (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Martie - Pardon me if I steal words from Mike and Marge - for I feel just as they've expressed here one of my daily prayers is that you never stop writing and posting here! |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Good gosh girl, you stick marbles in your mouth too? This has put SUCH a permanent picture in my mind of what might ever happen if you and I met over tea...and I can hear the giggles! Oh yes...this absolutely graces the top shelf of my Martie Wing... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Coco--Thank you for reading, an especially for the "poet friend". Bill--don't worry, it is like breathing, I require it to live...and thanks for being so sweet. Karilea--Does that mean too as in you do, and didn't tell anyone, or too in yikes? One day we WILL giggle over tea, count on it. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Martie your right..! If you read it three times it is alot longer... becomes more you... Thanks for the Que, I mean clue... Sheesh, do I know what I'm talking about... It's all Doreen's fault, she must have given me a virus... (((smile))) Love and prayers Sis & Taylor. dale [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 01-25-2001).] |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
You do such amazing things with words!! This is lovely, Martie! Denise |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Ooops...the giggles made this bubble right back to the top! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
It Is a good poem in a every word you wrote  enjoy your read |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And it is waiting, every time I see your name. *S* I like this, Martie... it leaves me smiling! *S* |
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JLR Senior Member
since 2001-02-04
Posts 1785 |
This is how good you are...I was already feeling that marble in my mouth when I got to the next verse and felt very silly. THIS is poetry! |
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Dennis Member
since 2001-02-19
Posts 235Indiana |
Ok, is THIS how it works I liked this very much.Dennis |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Yes, I'm glad this came back up! What a great write!! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--love and prayers to you too. Denise--Thank you for thinking that. Karilea--Your giggles are pretty powerful...thanks you. vandana--thank you for such a sweet reply. Ruth--Your smile makes me smile. Dennis--only a little painting of what I see. Snowpants--I'm so glad you enjoyed the poem...thank you for the sweet reply. |
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