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The Sweeping Hand
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The Sweeping Hand |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla 
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The Sweeping Hand Kicking dust into sleep A hand, touched dreamers reap Lingering lie by the eye Brought a moan to a sigh. From somewhere in slumber land The hand set a strand to grand Changed a curtains residue Let my senses fill with you. Soft music whispered, wave on wave And ecstasy rose, crave on crave. I brushed your lips with fingertips. And hung loves earrings little quips You gleaned in bright my valley green Screening splendor to the scene. Deejay the babbling brook in play And made my heart just melt away. Oh Morpheus be good, be kind Please let her linger in my mind. Do not touché the schemes bouquet Let stay this dreamers golden stray. And then the hand of dust lost sweep And thrust went back to aimless sleep. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
I very much want this to be evening, and this the last poem read before slipping into Morpheus' hands.... O, good write! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Lingering lie by the eye Brought a moan to a sigh. ================== Changed a curtains residue Let my senses fill with you. ==================== I brushed your lips with fingertips. And hung loves earrings little quips ==================== Deejay the babbling brook in play And made my heart just melt away. Oh Morpheus be good, be kind Please let her linger in my mind. Do not touché the schemes bouquet Let stay this dreamers golden stray. And then the hand of dust lost sweep And thrust went back to aimless sleep. ================== I KNEW IT!!!!!!!! you're EVEN COOL when ya sleep  Oh MAN I LOVE this poem!!! how many cool, unique clever lines can one poem have?? how many metaphors can be mastered .. "The hand set a strand to grand" "Changed a curtains residue" "And hung loves earrings little quips" "Deejay the babbling brook in play" "Do not touché the schemes bouquet" "Let stay this dreamers golden stray." "And then the hand of dust lost sweep" "And thrust went back to aimless sleep." and then lets talk about the sweet and tender emotions expressed in the longing for the dream's essence to linger ... thats a *sigh* from Sy on high poetry in motion me sweet ... Sweet dreams sweet Sy-babes *winkiewinkie*  mePS ... "Brought a moan to a sigh." Randy had chips and beer before bed...didnt he ... ROFL (or was it raspberry tea) hehe  meIt's amazing how you make your face just like a wall how you take your heart and turn it off how I turn my head and lose it all MB20 |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
BTTT *WWSS* |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Soft music whispered, wave on wave And ecstasy rose, crave on crave. I brushed your lips with fingertips. And hung loves earrings little quips You gleaned in bright my valley green Screening splendor to the scene. Deejay the babbling brook in play And made my heart just melt away.' Yes, I agree with JM...lots of clever metaphors! Wonderful write...I really enjoyed this!! sp  do I believe we'd be better off apart? can I see my world without you in it? baby, not for a single minute... |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sunshine, Very sweet comment. *L* JM, What would I do without you? You bring a sigh to my eye Like raspberry pie. Winkiewinkie Blinky Stinky Snowpants, Wonderful comment, thank you so much. |
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