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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

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Tamarac Fla

0 posted 2001-03-05 07:01 AM

The Sweeping Hand

Kicking dust into sleep
A hand, touched dreamers reap
Lingering lie by the eye
Brought a moan to a sigh.

From somewhere in slumber land
The hand set a strand to grand
Changed a curtains residue
Let my senses fill with you.

Soft music whispered, wave on wave
And ecstasy rose, crave on crave.
I brushed your lips with fingertips.
And hung loves earrings little quips

You gleaned in bright my valley green
Screening splendor to the scene.
Deejay the babbling brook in play
And made my heart just melt away.

Oh Morpheus be good, be kind
Please let her linger in my mind.
Do not touché the schemes bouquet
Let stay this dreamers golden stray.

And then the hand of dust lost sweep
And thrust went back to aimless sleep.

Sunshine

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Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-03-05 07:11 AM

I very much want this to be evening, and this the last poem read before slipping into Morpheus' hands....

O, good write!

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2001-03-05 08:19 AM

Lingering lie by the eye
Brought a moan to a sigh.
==================
Changed a curtains residue
Let my senses fill with you.
====================
I brushed your lips with fingertips.
And hung loves earrings little quips
====================
Deejay the babbling brook in play
And made my heart just melt away.

Oh Morpheus be good, be kind
Please let her linger in my mind.
Do not touché the schemes bouquet
Let stay this dreamers golden stray.

And then the hand of dust lost sweep
And thrust went back to aimless sleep.
==================

I KNEW IT!!!!!!!!
you're EVEN COOL when ya sleep

Oh MAN I LOVE this poem!!!

how many cool, unique clever lines can one poem have??
how many metaphors can be mastered ..

"The hand set a strand to grand"
"Changed a curtains residue"
"And hung loves earrings little quips"
"Deejay the babbling brook in play"
"Do not touché the schemes bouquet"
"Let stay this dreamers golden stray."
"And then the hand of dust lost sweep"
"And thrust went back to aimless sleep."

and then lets talk about the sweet and tender
emotions expressed in the longing for the dream's essence to linger ...
thats a *sigh* from Sy on high
poetry in motion me sweet ...
Sweet dreams sweet Sy-babes
*winkiewinkie*

me

PS ...

"Brought a moan to a sigh."

Randy had chips and beer before bed...didnt he ... ROFL

(or was it raspberry tea) hehe

me

It's amazing
how you make your face just like a wall
how you take your heart and turn it off
how I turn my head and lose it all
MB20

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

3 posted 2001-03-05 06:57 PM

BTTT
*WWSS*

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

4 posted 2001-03-05 08:59 PM

'Soft music whispered, wave on wave
And ecstasy rose, crave on crave.
I brushed your lips with fingertips.
And hung loves earrings little quips

You gleaned in bright my valley green
Screening splendor to the scene.
Deejay the babbling brook in play
And made my heart just melt away.'

Yes, I agree with JM...lots of clever metaphors! Wonderful write...I really enjoyed this!!

sp

do I believe we'd be better off apart?
can I see my world without you in it?
baby, not for a single minute...

Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07

Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla

5 posted 2001-03-05 09:46 PM

Sunshine,
Very sweet comment. *L*

JM,
What would I do without you?
You bring a sigh to my eye
Like raspberry pie.
Winkiewinkie Blinky Stinky

Snowpants,
Wonderful comment, thank you so much.

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