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Between Breaths
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Between Breaths |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California 
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Between Breaths I look out at my domain seeing rhythm as well as confusion, I can look inward and see the same. Landscape in any form is changeable so am I. Its only that in which we fight to change then continue on the fight that makes us move forward. It was a fight to take your first breath it will be the same at death, so anything in between must be fought for at different points in order for advancement. You are not alone in your battles even if those around you appear to be at peace with themselves, they just at the moment do not look weary from their own trials. Each battle won is a step towards an inner rhythmic peace that will help guide us through our journey, giving stability to a wearied soul. The battles won if treasured will become our strong hold empowering us to breathe a calm rhythmic beat inward as we enjoy they outwardly beauty of life. By, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Cerenity~ this is so wonderful!! the structure of this and the meaning behind it is just amazing. you have taken a very simple lesson, one which of all of us should remember in our times of trouble and weaved it into a breahtaking truth. excellent write! take care Amy  "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
every day my friend. . . you get better. . . this is no exception. . . wonderful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Aimster, < !signature-->That is such a loving thing to say thank you so very much. Love, Cerenity Ooop's Sven you slipped in there, thank you too, it's a good day isn't it  Im SMILING,,,,,,,,"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) [This message has been edited by Cerenity (edited 01-23-2001).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Each battle won is a step towards an inner rhythmic peace that will help guide us through our journey, giving stability to a wearied soul. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Cerenity, this is great sweetie... I'm keeping this poem as a pick-me-upper when those rainy days of frowns come popping by as this will surely remind me to open my eyes and see the rays of sun just beyond... Thank you for this marvelous read... *~coco~* |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
A nice reminder that we all have troubles, but people to share the burden with as well. "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi CocoBaci,AniKay Thank you both so much for your loving replys, Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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