Open Poetry #12 |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Quietly reflecting Tenderly musing Your voice, so vibrant Your image, so splendid Locked fast within my heart Branded in my brain Nothing else makes sense Unless you are a part Exulting in these feelings Keeping to myself Basking in the afterglow You always bring me to I think I'm almost ready To share my dream with you |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Oh Pepper.....share share...its worth it...this is lovely |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Share indeed, Although I have no idea whom this is to,I say follow your feelings becuase if you dont you`ll always wonder what might have been. Very Nice write. Mr.Magoo |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Pepper* Your poetry has grown so very much...it's a pleasure to watch and a joy to see the gold that you are weaving my friend~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
These are falling in love words ![]() |
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Pixydust Junior Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 36 |
This was beautiful. "I'm almost ready to share my dream with you" Loved it! Thanks for sharing. Pixydust ![]() |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful done my friend....its always great to share a dream...love it. Charisma |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
Paula, okay, okay...I'm working up my courage ![]() Mr. Magoo, thanks for your words ![]() BDC..oh how you put a smile on my face....high praise coming from you!!! ![]() SEA...thank you so much ![]() Pixydust, thanks for reading...and your kind words ![]() Charisma...well, sharing should only make it better, right??? Thank you for reading too ![]() Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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Victoria![]()
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Love the poem and the title neighbor ![]() ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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catalinamoon![]()
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Pepper, I know this dream, its a beautiful one. I hope it comes true for you. Sandra |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely write and feelings expressed in this. Nicely penned. Poeminister "...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls- O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love." -Poe |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
sharing the dream is the ultimate with the ultimate person...I hope it all comes true for you...wanderer lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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