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wandering
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since 2001-01-21
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0 posted 2001-01-22 07:36 PM

Dreams flutter
Upon soft pillows of whisper
Shifting between shadows
Of subliminal thoughts
Buried memories of yesterdays
Unwind
Like a spring uncoiled
Elastic emotions
Stretched into unwanted awakening
Hands clench
As fetal position uncurls
Into eyes wide open
Staring into silent darkness
Where dreams flutter



lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer
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1 posted 2001-01-22 08:42 PM

Excellent! Loved the voice of this poem, all so true and well-said. Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton
Mike
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2 posted 2001-01-22 09:38 PM

Very, very nice.  Enjoyed muchly.
wandering
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3 posted 2001-01-23 07:34 PM

Thank you both for taking the time to read..I truly appreciate it

lost in thought, found in words.
wanderer
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