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Temptress

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

0 posted 2001-01-22 10:01 PM

Silence,
A good friend in a secluded coffee shop,
Somewhere between sane and on the brink.
We'd sip memories,
And eat truth stew,
And still be able to recover,
If it gave us food for thought poisoning.
We'd listen,
As we came to terms with ourselves.
Then I'd really know what I wanted.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

1 posted 2001-01-22 10:03 PM

you know, it really is that simple. . .

you just have to listen. . .

excellent writing. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

snowpants
Member Elite

since 2000-09-16

Posts 2061
KS

2 posted 2001-01-22 10:12 PM

I so know what you mean here, and can definitely relate. You've worded it wonderfully. Excellent write, Temptress!

sp

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

3 posted 2001-01-22 11:06 PM

Im not sure that I understand the full meaning of your write but I`ll keep reading till I do because i hate to comment on something and look back and think,what the heck was I thinking.lol
Ya know what I mean?
Mr.Magoo

insect
Senior Member

since 2000-04-22

Posts 1014

4 posted 2001-01-22 11:37 PM

One medium on the brink!
Great poem Temptress
Loved this!

doreen peri
Member Elite

since 1999-05-25

Posts 3812
Virginia

5 posted 2001-01-22 11:57 PM

nothing like a good friend in a coffee shop....

... i think a lot of people need that... nice write, jenn! hope you're well... haven't talked to you for the longest.... (put some sugar and cream in there! why not? life is short! hehe *wink)

Irish Rose
Member Patricius

since 2000-04-06

Posts 10263

6 posted 2001-02-05 10:30 AM

Coffee shops----yes; what a great idea!!!!
Soon as spring comes 'round..... Thank you, Jenn.

"I walked beside the evening sea and dreamed a dream that could not be." George William Curtis

Aimster
Member Elite

since 2000-02-19

Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC

7 posted 2001-02-05 10:36 AM

temptress~

am i ever glad i stumbled upon this
little jewel. excellent writing from
your talented pen! simply wonderful.

take care
~amy~

"A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten
the words."

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