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Parker
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0 posted 2001-01-22 05:10 PM

Dream Lover Sonnet

Above and out beyond the dreamy lights;
No Milky stars can sooth this aching heart.
Your visits from the nether, curse my night,
A voice so sweet it shames the meadowlark.
You kiss and hide like moonbeams shadowed glint,
To dance on porous tears that fall in shards,
And leave an imprint wish on heart thread tips;
A pixy’s kiss the curse of poet bards.
I wake to find your scent outside the dream
And breathe in deep the treasure you have left,
A taste of flowers from a summer scene;
The curses of your sweetness never rest.
This vow love, to never seek another,
cause none compares to you, my dream lover.

James Parker Haley Jan 22, 2001

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 01-23-2001).]

Sunshine

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1 posted 2001-01-22 05:41 PM

Parker...this is lovely!....

SEA

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with you

2 posted 2001-01-22 05:44 PM

Parker~ This is so beautiful........

"The curses of your sweetness never rest.
And vow love, to never seek another,
Because none compares to my dream lover."

Major *sigh* here sweetie........
Lovin this one

-SEA

Janet Marie
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3 posted 2001-01-22 06:08 PM

You kiss and hide like moonbeams shadowed glint,
To dance on porous tears that fall in shards,
And leave an imprint wish on heart thread tips;
A pixy’s kiss the curse of poet bards.
I wake to find your scent outside the dream
And breathe in deep the treasure you have left,
A taste of flowers from a summer scene;
The curses of your sweetness never rest.
And vow love, to never seek another,
Because none compares to my dream lover.
============================

whoa..thats some dream p-man ...
(have you been drinking raspberry tea)

never mind .. I KNOW... GREEN TEA!!
and the way you write these sonnets with such ease makes me green of envy

very cool write .. very cool phrases in here
excellent imagery

"You kiss and hide like moonbeams shadowed glint,
To dance on porous tears that fall in shards,
And leave an imprint wish on heart thread tips;"

like I said...VERY COOL..
you shine in sonnets sweet tease ..
you write em ... I collect em

Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

Denise

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4 posted 2001-01-22 10:52 PM

I love your sonnets, Parker! Lovely!

Denise

Poeminister
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5 posted 2001-01-22 10:53 PM

Beautiful Sonnet. Very nicely penned.

Poeminister

"...no single sound too rude upon thy slumber shall intrude, Our thoughts, our souls-
O God above! In every deed shall mingle, love."
-Poe

Victoria

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6 posted 2001-01-22 10:58 PM

Very lovely Parker..and wonderful iambic pentameter..

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Mistletoe Angel

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7 posted 2001-01-22 11:00 PM

(sigh) Parker, this is so dreamy, so very lovely! (sigh) I could see something that looke dlike the heavens as I read this! Oh, so breathtakingly beautiful! May that dream girl become reality, and forever love you, sharing your beautiful heart! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

CocoBaci
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8 posted 2001-01-22 11:47 PM

Wow I am greatly impressed with this sonnet of dream lover you share with us...
It's a keeper for me and into the library it shall be...
Thank you PoetFriend for a most enjoyable read...
*~coco~*

dgvarner
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9 posted 2001-01-23 03:25 AM

WOW........be back later when i regain my breath.......

hugs, g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

Butterflies_dont_cry
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10 posted 2001-01-23 05:31 AM

Parker*
JM said to read this and to bring my pedestal...

Yeppers....she was sooooooooo right! This
is so beautiful...I could get lost in your
weave Parker and never want to come back~

Parker
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11 posted 2001-01-23 12:14 PM

Sunshine, thank you.

SEA, thank you.... I just love a sign..

Janet, thanks way cool browneye's.

Denise, thank you.

Poeminister, thank you very much.

Victoria, thank you, not sure that the imabic is trully good but thanks.

Noah, thank you.

Coco, thanks very much.

dg, ok no teasing with the breathing thing.

Butterflies, thank you, that pedistal kind of looks kind of small for two... Oh, didn't janet tell you what those pedistals are really for.

Parker

Mark Bohannan
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12 posted 2001-01-23 12:34 PM

Excellent as always sir. I am at a loss as to how you do these so perfectly and that is why I am left in awe each time you pen one because not only do they shine in what they express but the mastery you hold over this style "RULES".

dgvarner
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13 posted 2001-01-23 12:39 PM

.....*sigh*.....

breathtaking love...

i love you.....uh..i mean..I LOVE THIS!...oops!..haha

scared ya didnt i...

g

"i was thinkin'
if you were lonely
maybe we could leave here
and no one would know
at least not to the point where we would think so..."

David2
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14 posted 2001-01-23 03:12 PM

James,
Everyone who has ever read my work knows I adore the sonnet and you certainly do it justice here. I found this terribly romantic and very well written. Good work
David2

AniKay83
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15 posted 2001-01-23 03:30 PM

*is sighing with a dreamy look*
*clicks the library button*

"Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable"
~The Wizard of Oz
Much love all,
Krissie

peppermint35
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16 posted 2001-01-23 05:36 PM

Ditto on the sighs... the perfectness of this, and that it's a keeper!!!

Pepper
"A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth."
Percy Bysshe Shelley

Charisma

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17 posted 2001-01-23 05:48 PM

sorry can't help it....but I must do it...

*SIGH****once again****SIGH****

these vow is soooooooooooo lovely and romantic.....can dwell in it. beautiful sonnet....excellent piece...as always.

((hugs))
Charisma

catalinamoon

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18 posted 2001-01-23 06:11 PM

Wow, this was very nice, I love the style, and the theme.
Sandra

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19 posted 2001-01-23 08:29 PM

Very sensual writing, my friend. A longing in you that makes these poems sing with desire.

Cor

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20 posted 2001-01-24 12:17 PM

This is a very touching poem, love the way it flowed so magically and tugged at the heart strings, nicely done.

Parker
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21 posted 2001-01-24 09:59 AM

Mark, very kind words, but long way for me to go, I think.

dg, ok er ah....

take backs arn't allowed.

David2, thank you, I too have read your work, analyzed them carefully... thank you for the reply.

AniKay, thank you for the sigh's.

peppermint35, thank you to on those sigh's.

charisma, thank you too... hmmm more sigh's.

catalinamoon, thank you very much.

Corinne, thank you sweet poet.

Rosebud1229, thank you very much.

Parker

dgvarner
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22 posted 2001-01-27 12:15 PM

WHAT?!! OMG...!! no take backs??? but, uh..well..i mean..you know..it was..well..just a freudian slip!!! LOL!

g

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23 posted 2001-01-27 03:00 AM

Freudian slip.... vell I have you know young lady that I don't vear slips. Even vhen I'm in Scotland in full kilt... a good breeze keeps the disposition perky..

Sigmund

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dgvarner
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24 posted 2001-01-27 01:41 PM

ah siggy....i must get to scotland...!!!

Parker
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25 posted 2001-01-29 12:04 PM

dg, don't be going to Scotland with that ziggy character.... never trust a shrink, he just wants to get you on the couch... and I can think of more interesting places...

Parker

Paula Finn
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26 posted 2001-01-29 01:04 PM

So that was you tiptoeing through my dreams huh? Well come back ok? And more interesting places? Do tell Parker...come close and whisper to me...I have a few interesting places of my own I will share with you...hehehe

dgvarner
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27 posted 2001-01-29 03:30 PM

ok then..can i go to..somewhere..with "that ziggy character's" alter ego?? and do ya think....um...maybe..you might model one of those KILTS for me??

and as far as more interesting places...well..i guess we dont HAVE to go to scotland.....what else did ya have in mind love?!!

(just so long as you wear a kilt...in the breeze.. teehee...)

[This message has been edited by dgvarner (edited 01-29-2001).]

Marina
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28 posted 2001-01-29 06:17 PM

Wow.....another Sonnet. Your skill for this type of poetry comes so natural for you. Nice job.

It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

Parker
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29 posted 2001-01-30 02:56 PM

Paula, I bet you do....

dg, sure can me lassy.... kilts can be dangerous..

Marina, thanks.

Parker

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