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Poeminister
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since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2001-01-22 01:49 PM

Caramel Eyes

Capitivatingly
your soft sweet caramel eyes
always pull--pull me

Poeminister

[This message has been edited by Poeminister (edited 01-22-2001).]

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2001-01-22 01:54 PM

PoeMinister~
Not only do I LOVE it ...
it makes me h u n g r y ! !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

2 posted 2001-01-22 02:13 PM

I admire this form so much..and you do it so well...I know someone with caramel eyes--and you've described the effect beautifully!

Sunshine

Administrator

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since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

3 posted 2001-01-22 02:13 PM

O, O, I know a brown-eyed girl that this will please so!

Now...green! [Hey, if'n you're going to do requests, I mean, what the hey!]

Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

4 posted 2001-01-22 02:19 PM

love it.....and makes me smile.

wonderful done my friend.

((hugs))
Charisma

Victoria

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since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

5 posted 2001-01-22 03:01 PM

i love the caramel eyes..i have never heard of that before..very romantic Poeminister

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-01-22 07:44 PM

Thank you all! Glad you liked.

Poeminister

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2001-01-22 08:53 PM

(sigh) Beautiful, and sweet! So very lovely! Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Janet Marie
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since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

8 posted 2001-01-22 11:13 PM

well..this brown eyes is smiling ..
thank you poet sir

well done imagery and emote
jm

Poetry is not an opinion expressed ...
It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ...
or a smiling mouth.
~Kahlil Gibran~

kaile

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since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

9 posted 2001-01-23 06:09 AM

another one i enjoyed...

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

10 posted 2001-01-23 04:11 PM

PM

this is wonderful.......made my brown eyes light up

-SEA

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