Open Poetry #12 |
Still........ |
vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
"Still......" Still love you, Will love you forever Still , There Is time for us To know, Each word we say, Still want you, No matter what..... Still..... Still.... So many stars are shinnning tonight, When we are meant to be together, Still closer to you, No wonder why.... But want to still for the reason why? Still Is so still to be In love, So In love with you There don't have to be Any reason to say why? Still There Is time for us, There Is every reson reason to answer it.... There Is every reason to change In time, So still to know..... Still , There Is still an anwere for it, Still..... So much to understand, So much to know why, so much to say it all, When It comes to you And maybe Life Is a still.... When you don't understand it all, When night calls out for love.... And the love carries away with the rain, There Is still for us ......Yes, Still wait Till the time wants us to be closer..... Still.... |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
vandana, Beautifully said. Enjoyed the read. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Hi vandana, You certainly have expressed in the words of this writing many feelings. Nicely done, and I wish you the best. BC |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
VanDana~ Gonna give this one a lift to the top - cause I love the sincerity of your heart ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Still a lovely piece. wonderful done. Charisma |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you all for your replies it means a lot to me |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
vandana. . . you have always known just what speaks to me. . . wonderful my friend. . . ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Frankie Member
since 2001-01-10
Posts 57 |
Vandana - I love this. Very much enjoyed. "Still, Still Love You, Will Love You Forever" Frankie |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
be still, my heart. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Thank you for your replies |
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