Open Poetry #12 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
If... Virginia Salter If I cry into the night and there is no one there to hear, am I still weeping? If a melody leaves my lips and drifts into a deep abyss, am I still singing? If I give my heart in sweet surrender and it falls upon the sand beneath your feet, am I still loving? © September 17, 2000 |
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Lady Lightning Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 422Kentucky |
Wow, Virginia..some tough questions you have asked here... I can't wait to see what the others say, but I "think" maybe it's Yes, Yes, and ummm.I really haven't decided about the last one yet...Hmmm, maybe I'll come back and answer that one later..hehe.. ![]() The way to love anything is to realize it might be lost. author unknown |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks for reading and your cute response. I can't wait to see either, if anyone else reads it. thanks again! |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
Yes. Yes. Yes. lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow~ I really liked your creative take on these age-old questions. Very clever and sad, there's much depth in these few words. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Thanks wandering and Melissa for reading and commenting, I appreciate you both. |
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