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Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

0 posted 2001-01-20 11:13 PM

dusk

now
i
g
h
t

shadow
l
e
e
p
silently

dream
e
f
e
n
d
s

mute moon

catcher

rises

nightmares

d
a
w
now

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Sunshine

Administrator

Member Empyrean

since 1999-06-25

Posts 63354
Listening to every heart

1 posted 2001-01-20 11:36 PM

much different from my dreamcatcher of some time ago...

a wonderful write, Sven!

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-01-20 11:36 PM

Wow, this is so unique, expressed hauntingly well...my God this is just wow~ So much depth in few words.

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Dawn Eclipse
Senior Member

since 2000-01-31

Posts 637
The Horsehead Nebula

3 posted 2001-01-20 11:41 PM

Wow Sven! It's been a while, but wow! I enjoyed this.. really unique. Wonderful write my friend.

"Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today"
~Broadway Musical RENT~

*Cassandra Roseen*

Saunni
Senior Member

since 2000-07-11

Posts 1777
West Virginia

4 posted 2001-01-20 11:43 PM

Wow! This is sooo cool and very different! I like different.

Sauni

Sauni :)
Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak
I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps

WinterTalon
Member

since 2001-01-14

Posts 141
Brooksville, KY, USA

5 posted 2001-01-20 11:50 PM

Hey! That was Koolies!

~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~

Temptress

Moderator

Member Rara Avis

since 1999-06-15

Posts 7136
Mobile, AL

6 posted 2001-01-21 07:50 PM

Ahh..This is nice, and I LOVE the style you've written it in.

Can I be your willful breeze,
Come to touch,
Your heart to ease?

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

7 posted 2001-01-21 08:05 PM

Thanks to all!!!

Sunshine, I was going for different. . . thank you. . .

Melissa, thank you so much. . . just exploring my other "experimental" side. . .

DE, thank you. . . it's been a while hasn't it?? Welcome back. . .

Saunni, you like different?? I'll remember that. . .

. . . thank you my friend. . .

PE, thanks!! Glad you liked!!!

Temptress, I just knew that you would like this one. . . lol. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Elizabeth Santos
Member Rara Avis

since 1999-11-08

Posts 9269
Pennsylvania

8 posted 2001-01-21 08:08 PM

What an enchanting title and a unique presentation
Excellent, my friend
Liz

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

9 posted 2001-01-21 08:16 PM

Sven~

  For such an awesome
  Offering, I thank you
  Rightly

  Outside
  Nightmares must stay
  Locked in the
  Yarns of

  The dreamcatcher
  Hung to
  Ensnare them

  Giving way to
  Only the good dreams
  Of the night
  Dreamed in the heart of

  Dreamers who
  Remember to follow
  Earnest teachings of
  Ancient Indian legends
  Manifested
  Sorrow cannot

  Enter to harm
  Neither shall
  The shadows of the night
  Enter where there is
  Ritualistic light

*Thanks my friend.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

10 posted 2001-01-22 02:39 AM

wonderful done Sven....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

Marsha

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-10

Posts 7423
Maidstone Kent England

11 posted 2001-01-22 06:23 AM

Sven love, this is awesome, if I'm learning my lessons well I should leave the one word

STUNNING

and leave it at that.

(But you know I can't just say that it truly is stunningly fabulous.
I love it as always
Take care
Mushy

Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

12 posted 2001-01-22 06:32 AM

Sven,
you caught the dream and scattered its rainbow droplets far and near.
Keth

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

Butterflies_dont_cry
Member Elite

since 2000-03-06

Posts 3733
Michigan

13 posted 2001-01-22 06:41 AM

Stunning Sven...You always could weave it so I could SEE it....fantastic~

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

14 posted 2001-01-22 06:54 PM

Liz, thank you my friend. . . just came out this way. . .

Marge, you're welcome my friend. . . and thank you. . .

Charisma, thank you also. . . and {{hugs}} to you too my friend. . .

Marsha love, I know that you can't just leave one word. . . so leave as many as you want!!! Thank you. . .

Kethry, the dream comes. . . I am merely the messenger. . . thank you. . .

BDC, I always will . . . thank you my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mother_Earth
Senior Member

since 2000-11-20

Posts 1370
1/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan

15 posted 2001-01-22 07:05 PM

I don't know how all of you make writing poetry look so easy in so many forms! With teachers like you, I may have a chance. Such a different form and then Marge writes one right back at 'ya. I will keep learning from reading your great works of art. Very nice, hugs, ME

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

16 posted 2001-01-22 09:01 PM

Sven,
Very unique and lovely. If only the "dream catcher" could make the good ones come true.
Love, Elise

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