Open Poetry #12 |
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dreamcatcher |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA ![]() |
dusk now i g h t shadow l e e p silently dream e f e n d s mute moon catcher rises nightmares d a w now ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
much different from my dreamcatcher of some time ago... a wonderful write, Sven! |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Wow, this is so unique, expressed hauntingly well...my God this is just wow~ So much depth in few words. Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Dawn Eclipse Senior Member
since 2000-01-31
Posts 637The Horsehead Nebula |
Wow Sven! It's been a while, but wow! I enjoyed this.. really unique. Wonderful write my friend. ![]() "Forget regret, or life is yours to miss. No other course, no other way... No day but today" ~Broadway Musical RENT~ *Cassandra Roseen* |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Wow! This is sooo cool and very different! I like different. Sauni Sauni :) Have you ever known the color grey when the nighttime finds you weak I have, I've walked that road each time; that's where my angel sleeps |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
Hey! That was Koolies! ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Ahh..This is nice, and I LOVE the style you've written it in. ![]() Can I be your willful breeze, Come to touch, Your heart to ease? |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Thanks to all!!! ![]() Sunshine, I was going for different. . . thank you. . . Melissa, thank you so much. . . just exploring my other "experimental" side. . . ![]() DE, thank you. . . it's been a while hasn't it?? Welcome back. . . ![]() Saunni, you like different?? I'll remember that. . . ![]() PE, thanks!! Glad you liked!!! ![]() Temptress, I just knew that you would like this one. . . lol. . . ![]() ------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
What an enchanting title and a unique presentation Excellent, my friend Liz |
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Marge Tindal![]() ![]() ![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Sven~ For such an awesome Offering, I thank you Rightly Outside Nightmares must stay Locked in the Yarns of The dreamcatcher Hung to Ensnare them Giving way to Only the good dreams Of the night Dreamed in the heart of Dreamers who Remember to follow Earnest teachings of Ancient Indian legends Manifested Sorrow cannot Enter to harm Neither shall The shadows of the night Enter where there is Ritualistic light *Thanks my friend. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Charisma![]() ![]() ![]()
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful done Sven....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Marsha![]()
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Sven love, this is awesome, if I'm learning my lessons well I should leave the one word STUNNING and leave it at that. (But you know I can't just say that it truly is stunningly fabulous. I love it as always Take care Mushy ![]() Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Sven, you caught the dream and scattered its rainbow droplets far and near. Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Stunning Sven...You always could weave it so I could SEE it....fantastic~ |
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Sven![]() ![]()
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Liz, thank you my friend. . . just came out this way. . . Marge, you're welcome my friend. . . and thank you. . . ![]() Charisma, thank you also. . . and {{hugs}} to you too my friend. . . Marsha love, I know that you can't just leave one word. . . so leave as many as you want!!! Thank you. . . Kethry, the dream comes. . . I am merely the messenger. . . thank you. . . BDC, I always will . . . thank you my friend. . . ![]() ---------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
I don't know how all of you make writing poetry look so easy in so many forms! With teachers like you, I may have a chance. Such a different form and then Marge writes one right back at 'ya. I will keep learning from reading your great works of art. Very nice, hugs, ME |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Sven, Very unique and lovely. If only the "dream catcher" could make the good ones come true. Love, Elise |
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