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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Your touch turns ice to fire Unleashing rivers of sedated desire Glowing embers fanned to rage As a dance of destiny we engage Bring me baited to each peak Left behind us disguises meek Masks of yesterday lay on the floor Lover’s past shall walk no more Tomorrow’s sun slumbers on Love me into the breaking dawn Hold each sigh with a softened palm Cover me in a blissful calm Shallow breath meets tumbling beat Cascading flesh of melting heat Call Desire by my name Draw me into your sapphire flame Thunder & lightening of touch and kiss Tumble through a tranquil abyss Soft whispers float fogged in time While bruised hearts intertwine Tender love fills my barren soul Leading me to a sun kissed knoll Each day unfolds like petals fresh While hearts and souls forever mesh |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
BDC, this write left me breathless from beginning to end. Astounding and wonderful! write on Keth Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ Oh, my ... what a joy to read this tenderly portrayed piece. Such a compliment to your talented hand and tender heart. Lovely, lady. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written...enjoyed muchly. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
How truly magnificient....another masterpiece from you!!!  Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
What a beautiful write from you this morning! It still amazes me how you can pen passion so delicately...truly a treasure, m'girly one...and so nice to see you post again...Warm hugs on a cold day...brrr.... love you! |
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Parker Member Elite
since 2000-01-06
Posts 3129ON |
Butterflies.... very nice and sensual, better then coffee. Sure get the blood flowing.  Parker |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Lovely and desireful piece. Beautifully penned. Poeminister |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
BDC, this is absolutely beautiful... A treasure of a poem that I shall keep in library... Thankyou PoetFriend *~coco~* |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
So beautiful, my Butterfly. I hope to see many more in this vain and not so "hurtie". It is time for happiness, right? love and hugs, Mom |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
very cool write me SS... your pen lit some flames of blue and gold heat for this beauty .. very very nice me girlie .. I do so like seeing you inspired to new heights way cool cadence in this too.. YEAH I ACTUALLY heard it over the imagery yayayaya *Wakka Wakka* ROTFL so great to see your name here on this day as well... later baby love ya me Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Holly my sweet friend....I don't think I need to tell you how beautiful and "t.m.t.t.v.c." this one is because for you to pen this level means it had to come from the depths of your heart and soul and that makes this cowboy happy just knowing that you are finding the "a.e.p.o.l." that you so deserve. Library time for this one of course. You keep penning these and someone is bound to ask for lessons. If you find yourself stranded in a storm ...then reach for my hand and we will play in the puddles together |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies--Beautiful, sensual and full of promise... You write with inspiration's pen. |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
You, my friend, already know what I think of this...don't you... {~,^} |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Tomorrow’s sun slumbers on Love me into the breaking dawn Hold each sigh with a softened palm Cover me in a blissful calm Shallow breath meets tumbling beat Cascading flesh of melting heat Call Desire by my name Draw me into your sapphire flame' Wonderful images you've penned here, butterflies! I love this! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
I agree with Mother Earth. . . you were always better with words like this. . . Wonderful. . . ----------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Keth* Thank you so much for reading...I've not been active in the forums lately and it's an honor to have you reading still...thank you~ Marge* You have always been one of my biggest inspirations...thank you for adding your ray of sunshine to this piece~ Mike* As always....it's an honor to have a poet of your caliber reading my work...thank you~ Pepper* You touch my heart with your praise...I'm so thankful to have you read~ S'en* I amaze YOU....no my dear friend...it is you that amaze me....and that is why you honor me with your sweet words and grace my heart with your friendship...thank you~ Parker* I can't think of many things better than coffee...but sensual is one of them I'm truly grateful for your comments...thank you~Poeminister* Thank you from the bottom of my heart....It is a pleasure to visit this place and be among all the beauty that resides here~ Coco* To be placed into your library is something that I don't take lightly...thank you sincrely for your kindness~ My mom...well it feels good to write a happier weave...sure to make the tougnes around here cluck but then again...what doest  Thank you for being there for me mom....with you on my side I can't go wrong!JM* Awwwwwwwwwwe you're gonna make me cry...beautiful weekend weather of golden skies make the perfect mood for my muse to slip into something a little more comfortable...lol glad you were here to enjoy it me sis...love you!Mark* Hmmmmmmmm lessons?....well they wouldn't be free thank you my dear friend for always being there...always cheering me on and giving my wings a lift when they feel to weak to flutter....there is nothing I could do to re-pay all you've done....thank you Mark...for everything~Martie* It's an honor to have you read and reply to my work....I hope you know how much I cherish your comments...thank you~ Karilea*...I know...and hope that you know as well my friend! SP* I'm so glad you enjoyed this...thank you from the bottom of my heart for your replies....they mean so much~ Sven* Thank you...seems like I've woven the sad all my life...but the happiness is coming...slow but sure...took time to find out that I need only look inside for the happiness I've always wanted...the rest will fall into place~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Butterfly, you continue to raise the standard a little more every time you put your pen paper. Excellent work my friend, take care! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Holly~ ~Wows~ and ~sighs~ this is so breathtaking, and the imagery is just phenomenal. Your pen must be magic! Um...err, can I borrow it?  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle my dear friend...you always see so much more than I do in my writings...sound familiar?? ...thank you for showing me the world through your eyes, it's a view I wouldn't want to miss...thank you~MH* I'm overwhelmed by your reply...thank you from the bottom of my heart...your comments are never taken lightly as I know you only say what you truly think...to be graced with your compliment leaves my heart filled with warmth this morning...thank you~ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
holly~ sweet butterfly...my oh my...the stunning beauty of this is breathtaking. in every weaved magic i read of yours i find myself enraptured as though you've told a tale. and i must say this is amongst one of my favorites. definitey going into my libary for another peek. take care. love ya amy "A friend is someone who knows the song in your heart and can sing it back to you when you have forgotten the words." |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Amy-girl* I need you giving me these little pep talks 24/7....how can I ever get down with an angel like you in my corner...thank you my dear friend...smiles and sunshine to you~ |
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