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KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

0 posted 2001-01-21 11:53 PM

cats in the cradle
the cow jumped over the moon
imagination
endless possibilites
unlock creativity

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Mr.Magoo
Member

since 2001-01-20

Posts 104

1 posted 2001-01-22 01:08 AM

Im not real sure that I understand this but I do want to let you know that I did take the time to read your writing.
I will read this again after I`ve had some rest.
God Bless
Mr.Magoo

Honeybee
Member Ascendant

since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

2 posted 2001-01-22 01:32 AM

A creative way to use famous nursery rhyme lines to convey your message. A great Tanka

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-01-22 02:46 AM

and this one shows your creativity....love it.

((hugs))
Charisma

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

4 posted 2001-01-22 03:36 AM

thanks for your time and comments.
Just one of my moods.LOL

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2001-01-22 03:41 AM

One thing about poetry........fantasy can so easily become a reality through our pens and I am forever grateful to have that escape.

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

6 posted 2001-01-22 07:39 AM

KoKo~
Well, this is certainly creative.
I like it !
You've done a nice job on a Tanka.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Kethry
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-07-29

Posts 9082
Victoria Australia

7 posted 2001-01-22 07:56 AM

KoKo great, creative Tanka.
write on
Kethry

Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen.

kaile

Member Ascendant

since 2000-02-06

Posts 5146
singapore

8 posted 2001-01-26 09:06 PM

i am fast becoming a fan of your tankas...do keep them coming..

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

9 posted 2001-01-26 09:17 PM

I've never heard of this form of poetry, but I love the message in here so much! Seems like Tanka is like double-haiku! Creativity is such a beautiful thing, without it the world would lack so much. May our pen be our sword, and soar into our imagination. Thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

10 posted 2001-01-26 09:27 PM

Very nice! Poetry in motion...that's what life is, don't you think?

KokoStewartKoomoa
Senior Member

since 2000-12-04

Posts 580
Waikiki, Hawaii

11 posted 2001-01-26 09:50 PM

Thanks so much to all of you! Yes life is truly a poem and in motion. Writers just draw out the gold nuggets

I love the creative flow expressed by writers and artists. It makes our world a joy to behold and experience.
Write on all! I enjoy your art as well.

Passion,imagination
and intellect
running together...
Poetry in motion~~~

Aloha with
warmest regards, Koko

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