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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages 
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 Rainbow When sunbeams encircle rainy clouds And tears of heaven reaching ground Whenever shattered darkness and mushy light Within many colors emerge side by side Than a promise reveal that once was made Inside God's truly love belayed Captured in portal of colors that grow Present hope in mystique of rainbow Portal Of Hope Colors Of Love Breaks through rainy clouds Sunbeams tracing the ground Weaving portal of hope and love A natural gift from our Shepherd above. Charisma [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Daniel J D Senior Member
since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia |
Charisma, A beautiful poem coming from deep within a beautiful person. Loved the style. Cheers. Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love (Daniel J D) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
When sunbeams encircle rainy clouds And tears of heaven reaching ground Whenever shattered darkness and mushy light Within many colors emerge side by side Than a promise reveal that once was made Inside God's truly love belayed Captured in portal of colors that grow Present hope in mystique of rainbow ==================== Charisma this is so lovely!!! wonderful imagery and the presentation adds to its delightfulness beautiful, creative work from your poets pen take care jm Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Charisma~ Just how lovely is this ! Delightfully done in your tender and talented hand. Beautiful, sweet poet. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
AMEN!! This is truely a work of ART. I see that you have a spiritual way of writing. Very Nice. Mr.Magoo |
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Honeybee Member Ascendant
since 1999-12-26
Posts 5372Ontario, CANADA |
Oh, this is so beautiful and hopeful. It's such a gem from your marvelous pen! Extremely well expressed  Take care, Melissa The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
Beautiful poem! A rainbow is always nice |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Daniel: May I thank you for your wonderful response. Janet: I'm so happy that you love it, thank you for the read and reply...always appreciate your response Marge: thank you for your lovely comments..its always great to see you around Mr.Magoo: thank you my friend Melissa: thank you for your lovely words...and that's what a raibow meant to be...love and hopefully. Insect: so it is...rainbows are beatiful...thank you |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Charisma, beautifully done! You have the heart of a poet...I think it belongs to me...please give it back. lol. Keth. Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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KokoStewartKoomoa Senior Member
since 2000-12-04
Posts 580Waikiki, Hawaii |
so very lovely! Charisma suits your so very well. Your poems are soft and comforting like white billowy clouds in the spring or the trickle of a sprin waterfall. I truly enjoy each piece that I read dear poet! Passion,imagination and intellect running together... Poetry in motion~~~ Aloha with warmest regards, Koko |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
A rainbow of comfort and love As always, a pleasure to read your work!!!Pepper "A poem is the very image of life expressed in its eternal truth." Percy Bysshe Shelley |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Charisma, this is such a charming write sweetie and a most delightful read... *~coco~* |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
Beautiful piece. I like this muchly. Poeminister "At the touch of love, everyone becomes a poet." -Plato |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Very special, Charisma. Sandra |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Kethry: honey...if I give it back at you, what would left for me than, think I am addict now, sorry friend can't give it back. KoKo: you are way to kind my friend, I am so glad that you like to read my simple poems. thank you for your always wonderful comments, I love to have them from you. peppermint: thank you for your lovely reply, thank you for stopping here, its nice to have you around. Coco: thank you my dear Poetfriend....its always a pleasure to read your lovely comments. poeminiser: thank you for the beautiful my friend.. Catalinamoon: thank you for your kind words. Vandana: so glad that you enjoyed it...thank you. |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Charisma~ this is full of beauty and smiles -SEA |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Thank you Sea.... glad that you love it. [This message has been edited by Charisma (edited 01-24-2001).] |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 YAY!!! Oh my gosh, this is one of my favorites of yours, I'm a huge fan of your work and I'm so lucky I found this! (kiss on cheek) This is a glorious portrayal of His covenant of colors, sweet friend, may we all look upon the rainbow and always find smiles and hopes and peace there! We all love you so much, sweet friend, this is outstanding! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Charisma, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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