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RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

0 posted 2001-03-24 02:23 PM

Platonic Winter

We've reached beyond our conversation,
Extending, if not hands then twigs of caring
For each other's thought. By sharing drops of each
We risk our own. Like pearls of rain
Dangling from a leafless arch
They inch along with hope to touch and coalesce.
Most fall short and puddle
Like the coffee spilled between us.
Though some, frozen out of cycle,
Venture on
Suspending
Spring.

RMW

Packratmike
Senior Member

since 2001-02-25

Posts 632
California, USA

1 posted 2001-03-24 02:45 PM

"Like pearls of rain
Dangling from a leafless arch
They inch along with hope to touch and coalesce."

Excellent! I loved this one! Thank you for a very nice read.

Mike

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

2 posted 2001-03-24 03:35 PM

RMW - very nice, first one of your writings I have read. I'll be back for more.

BC

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

3 posted 2001-03-24 05:08 PM

I'm really impressed with the images that you can bring out. . .

excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Trillium

Member Patricius

since 2001-03-09

Posts 12098
Idaho, USA

4 posted 2001-03-24 05:18 PM

Very enjoyable read. Welcome to Passions in Poetry!

Betty Lou Hebert

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

5 posted 2001-03-24 06:22 PM

Mike, BC, Sven, Trillium,

Thank you all. And, have a pleasant evening.

Bob

Joyce Johnson

Member Rara Avis

since 2001-03-10

Posts 9912
Washington State

6 posted 2001-03-24 07:47 PM

Very good writing. It's worth another go
around. I'm sending you back to the top. Joyce

Corinne
Member Ascendant

since 1999-10-28

Posts 5167
state of confusion

7 posted 2001-03-27 09:01 AM

You've captured the essence of that unending hope for love:

Though some, frozen out of cycle,
Venture on
Suspending
Spring.

We'd like to think love in the cards for all of us...

I'd publish this one.

Corinne

RMW
Senior Member

since 2001-03-21

Posts 1424

8 posted 2001-03-27 09:25 AM

Thank you, Corinne. Bob

nakdthoughts
Member Laureate

since 2000-10-29

Posts 19200
Between the Lines

9 posted 2004-04-28 07:02 PM

enjoying rereading you...just wanted to let you know...

M

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