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Transcending Unending
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Transcending Unending |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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Transcending Unending He had for her a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space he gave to her this unending love each time he gazed upon her face Tho not met, God had this plan for this woman, to have this man through trial and tribulation they stood to be as one, in love and good She had for him a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space she gave to him this unending love each time she gazed upon his face Tho not met, God had this plan for this woman, to have this man through trial and tribulation they stood to be as one, in love and good to know God’s wisdom, to feel his light to know His today can become the good night to experience the one love, no man to tear asunder hear it in God’s will; hear it in heaven’s thunder they had for them a transcending love far beyond the scope of time or space they gave to each this unending love and it was full of God’s sweet grace 01.10.01 Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
I love it! Beautiful peice. Poeminister |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, on the understanding that less is more.   This is beautiful love it truly is Take care Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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mark woolard Member
since 2001-01-02
Posts 143 |
beautiful. eloquent. i pray such love may find me one day. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
This brings a smile to my face friend ~ Ruth url=http://www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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inot2B Member Elite
since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205Arkansas |
they had for them a transcending love ***********Beautiful words************* |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
the words are beautiful and the style is superb....tell it like it is, Sunshine |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
This is how it should be, such a beautiful poem of a heavenly love........perfect! -SEA |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
Very beautiful love story and very well written |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Look at all the one-liners! This is great... Poeminister, thank you!... Marsha...look at you...lesson learned!... Ruth, I'm so glad I could do that for you... inot2B thank you... 'Deer, I shall, thank you... SEA, indeed it should, thank you... Rex...thank you for the very well... |
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