The Cry (my attempt at acrostic)

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Open Poetry #12

The Cry (my attempt at acrostic)

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2001-01-10 10:27 AM

The Cry

Threats of emotion
End in commotion
Answer my prayers
Release me tonight
Satisfaction in flight

Laps like the sea
Internally set free
Kindle such sorrow
Easing tomorrow

Rage like a storm
Aggravated form
Indulging distress
No need to suppress

Sunnyone
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since 2000-07-06

Posts 5334
Staffordshire, England

1 posted 2001-01-10 11:17 AM

Oh, this is wonderful!! If this is your first attempt, I shall be on the lookout for more!! Great write, my friend!!

Write on!
-<--<--{(@

VAS
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-11-16

Posts 7450
Oregon

2 posted 2001-01-10 11:18 AM

Wonderfully done! Yes tears must be allowed to flow...God's safety valve for our sanity and physical well-being.

Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

3 posted 2001-01-10 11:25 AM

Tears like rain... it sure seems like the tears never end sometimes doesn't it? You expressed yourself so well, a great acrostic!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

DonFurr
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since 2001-01-01

Posts 172
Monticello IN

4 posted 2001-01-10 12:30 PM

You read others and wish you could write as well as they do?
Dear lady you fit right in the company of bards.

1slick_lady
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since 2000-12-22

Posts 6088
standing on a shadow's lace

5 posted 2001-01-10 05:50 PM

thank you all i'm glad you like

serenity blaze
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since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

6 posted 2001-01-10 06:02 PM

Hey lady? maybe you could help ME with my poetry....smile...you are a fine poet and I loved this one....hugs to you.

spiked
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since 2000-01-13

Posts 873
Hammond, La USA

7 posted 2001-01-10 09:59 PM

Wonderful Job Slick,
Rich

Dark Angel
Member Patricius

since 1999-08-04

Posts 10095

8 posted 2001-01-10 10:20 PM

Threats of emotion
End in commotion

now, how true are these words!!

a great write slick

Maree

I need a lullaby
a kiss goodnight
Angel sweet love of my life
Oh, I need this

~Natalie Merchant~

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

9 posted 2001-01-10 10:21 PM

Got to agree with everybody. Great work, me friend.

jwesley

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