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As A Poet |
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Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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As a Poet to stir myriad feelings daubing colors before you, as a poet might do, this feat, with a simple, solitary line of words to be heard if I could to set thoughts reeling such as a poet should O, I would to splay forth before you a peacock's feather by spill of quill to draw your eye to the eye of plume illumined in green of blue if I could to set feelings pealing such as a poet should O, I would to cause your eye to seek new thoughts and nod your mind as a buttercup bobs on a spring day as words should cast your spirits to fly if I could to breathe beneath your wing such as a poet should O, I would to set before you a state of emotion so that next you glance 'pon the ocean you should feel the crashing waves taste yet the salt that saves if I could sail you thus away such as a poet should oh I would to feed you all that you might desire cause a craving beset by fires cause you internally to crave a need cast before you pearls of seed if I could gift you all this such as a poet should O, I would but mostly, I would set you to loving, craving, needing the word of the poet the song that he wrote by way of placing word to note to cast such feeling in what I wrote if I could… O, I would O, I would 01.21.01 |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Oh, you do! Sunshine, you do! If only I... |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoy the read  |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari love, this is truly wonderful, and you do it so beautifully too love, your really do. Utterly perfectly written love, as another rainbow shoots overhead. Take care Majestic Marsha or jush plain Mushy   Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
to feed you all that you might desire cause a craving beset by fires cause you internally to crave a need cast before you pearls of seed if I could gift you all this such as a poet should O, I would but mostly, I would set you to loving, craving, needing the word of the poet the song that he wrote by way of placing word to note to cast such feeling in what I wrote if I could… ==================== never doubt that you do me dear ... for you do it with grace ... poetic grace Poetry is not an opinion expressed ... It is a song that rises from a bleeding wound ... or a smiling mouth. ~Kahlil Gibran~ |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
Today - I've read - what? 4 Karilea poems - each unique, each dazzling and I'm at a total loss to rate which I like better - but this must be near the top! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ STUPENDOUS ! 'to splay forth before you a peacock's feather by spill of quill to draw your eye to the eye of plume illumined in green of blue if I could to set feelings pealing such as a poet should O, I would' Yes ! That's just how it should be. Wonderfully expressed. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
yes you would indeed.....outstanding piece my friend. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
you do, you do!! wonderful my friend. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Karilea--You are a feather so light, blue and green...whatever color you choose, you use..and you do it, so you...that's what makes it so full of poetic grace. |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your poetry gets better and better each day, it seems. This is amazing! A wonderful read. You are so inspiring, Lady Poet Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Every now and then, I think you all enjoy the fact that you put me at a loss for words, so I shall simply say... thank you. |
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