Open Poetry #12 |
Musings on a Saturday Night |
Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
In wide river ever flowing, Lives the spirit of all knowing, Born in mountains never scaled, Spawned of winds by gods exhaled. Nurtured 'mid high alpine nook, Weaned in icecapped mountain brook, Ever flowing to the sea, Seeking out eternity. Four winds converge, on river's crest, North to south, and east to west, Silent eddys every flowing, In the vortex of all knowing. Unseen currents of the river, Spirit to the sea deliver, Flowing, flowing to the sea, Spirit flows eternally. |
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WinterTalon Member
since 2001-01-14
Posts 141Brooksville, KY, USA |
I positively loved the flow of this one! Very catchy. Born in mountains never scaled, Spawned of winds by gods exhaled. Those are two very awesome lines. *nods* Very, very...< !signature--> ~The hardest thing is watching the one you love... love someone else.~ [This message has been edited by PoeticEnchantress (edited 01-21-2001).] |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Mike~ What a lovely cadence to your musings. The spirit runs freely. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Enchantment mixed with your exquitite descritions of nature make for a superb poem Very beautful Liz |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Not at all what the title led one to imagine....much, much better.... |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Oh...please do muse some more. Great write here ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Mike--I sure do love your early morning musings...this one is so richly painted...utterly beauiful! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You weave the gold that lines the skies Mike...this is beautiful as always....stunning even~ You can swim in the waves of the weave...without sinking into the mind of the weaver~ |
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Poeminister Senior Member
since 2000-02-26
Posts 1862Regina SK; Canada |
The imagery and flow in this are wonderful. Excellent writing. Poeminister |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Thank you all so much for the very gracious replies. I appreciate the comments and you're taking the time to read and respond to my poetry. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
it's amazing that I to wrote about nature tonight must be something in the air, loved it! |
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