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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone 
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On the shores of La Jolla I tasted salt on your lips and sand on your neck as a symphony of crashing waves played in the background and we danced closer to the edge. You spun me around and we fell in the sand your kiss warmed my silent soul until it sang to a new level vibrating in time with the water-and your heartbeat. Joined, we became a force nearly as awe inspiring as the ocean itself. Magic encircled us and we drew our names in the sand. The tide repeated to me our litany of love which had begun so long ago: Yes Yes we are one with the water, the sand and the sun. Yes Yes we are one with each other, the love, it is done... |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Beautiful write my friend, and San Diego will always hold wonderful memories for me and a special place in my heart thought I live far away. jwesley |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Beautiful, sensual write! I so love the beach, thanks for the trip there. Although, that's the only part of this piece I can truly relate to on the beach, itself. ;o} |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
You spun me around and we fell in the sand your kiss warmed my silent soul until it sang to a new level vibrating in time with the water-and your heartbeat. Joined, we became a force nearly as awe inspiring as the ocean itself. Magic encircled us and we drew our names in the sand. The tide repeated to me our litany of love which had begun so long ago: ================== very nice Cat..sensual and lovely... wonderful imagery as a backdrop to the emotions... well done ...love that word litany... definatly one of those words meant for poetry. take care jm When to the sessions of sweet silent thought, I summon up remembrance of things past ... I sigh the lack of many a thing I sought. ~Shakespeare~ |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Joined, we became a force nearly as awe inspiring as the ocean itself. Magic encircled us and we drew our names in the sand.' Wonderful write, Sandra! The beach is my favorite place to be, and to reminisce about, even if it does make me melancholy, like the ending of your poem. I love this! sp I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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athena4 Senior Member
since 2000-12-10
Posts 622 |
Catalina, The memories of SD will always stay in your heart. And I'm sure in his, too. A beautiful read. Put it in the book... Love, Elise |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
lovely..and romantic sandra...hope you get to go back  ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
wonderful Sandra. . . what memories the night holds for everyone. . .  -------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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