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Charisma

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since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

0 posted 2001-01-20 12:52 PM

Cloudy face

Passionately face
evoke fiery cloudy flames
shadows of sunset

Charisma

Mistletoe Angel

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since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

1 posted 2001-01-20 12:57 PM

(sigh) Beautiful images here, oh, I could see that passions flame myself. Yes, the sun sets with grace and beauty, as we sleep to await the next lovely morning. Great haiku, thank you for sharing, my friend!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

jwesley
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-04-30

Posts 7563
Spring, Texas

2 posted 2001-01-20 01:16 PM

Very nice, my friend

jwesley

Mark Bohannan
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since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

3 posted 2001-01-21 01:57 AM

yeppers.......sunsets and sunrises alike are always filled with passion. Beautiful Haiku my friend. Thank you for always sharing beauty in your works.

Marge Tindal

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since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

4 posted 2001-01-21 05:21 AM

Charisma~
In the setting of one hundred suns ~
not one
not one
ever quite like the one before ~
God's palette of colors grace us forevermore ~
forevermore
forevermore

Lovely, lovely images from your pen of Haiku.
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Honeybee
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since 1999-12-26

Posts 5372
Ontario, CANADA

5 posted 2001-01-21 10:09 AM

Now this is wonderful with powerful imagery!

Take care,
Melissa

The beauty of poetry gives my soul wings to fly free within dreams

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

6 posted 2001-01-21 05:28 PM

Beautiful haiku. Very nicely penned.

Poeminister

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

7 posted 2001-01-21 07:35 PM

MA: thank you for your wonderful reply, and it was my pleasure to share it with you.

Jwesley: thank you my friend

Mark: I'm glad that you enjoyed the beauty in these one too my friend...it's not me that shows it, but the wonderful nature is the great artist here.

Marge: indeed and I am greatful for that, that there are hundreds of sunsets and all different forevermore.....

Melissa: well thank you for your lovely comment..

Poeminister: thank you my friend for stopping and reading...its always nice to see you.

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