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Little Devils-Sleeping Angels |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
"Little Devils-Sleeping Angels" Yelling,fighting and throwing fits Does it ever end? Dad I promise I`ll be good. Can I have some money to spend? Muddy shoes and dirty carpet, Spilt milk on the kitchen floor. Neighborhood kid was hit with a ball, His parents are at the door. The gates left open and the dogs ran off. And this is a normal day. After their baths,milk and cookies, Off to bed the little devils`ll lay. I look at their faces while their asleep, And I see no devils at all. All I see are sleeping angels. How could so much trouble come from someone so precious and small?  JUST A THOUGHT It`s late at night that I see just how blessed us parents are. Before you grab your belt or raise your voice in anger Please,remember,no matter how difficult they may seem, they are precious little people that look up to you and me and they only know what we teach them. Mr.Magoo GBYA |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Hi there Mr.Magoo  Welcome to passions This is so true, your first post here and it is so very well said....well done and I so agree with your JUST A THOUGHT ~HUG~ ~Tracie~  Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mr. Magoo...Welcome to Passions! As a poet who also tries to instill a message in her work now and then, I am going to look forward to see what gems you gift us with as you come to enjoy our little corner of the World. Check your e-mail for a special message! |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Welcome to passions! I enjoyed this it rang so true. And the nice part is if you've done it right you get to help with the grandchildren.  write on Kethry Those of us who refuse to risk and grow get swallowed up by life. Patty Hansen. |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Welcome to Passions Mr. Magoo (luv your name)! What a charming first post ... very visual (and your "just a thought" is an added element of truth). Very nicely done, hope to read more! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MrMagoo~ Welcome to the posting side of Passions. A little gem you've entered with. Hope we'll get to see more of you. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ [email protected] |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Welcome to passions and what a great reminder ~ Ruth www.angelfire.com/pa/OriginalMinds/index.html |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I would like to say THANK YOU to everyone that has replied and for your kind comments. GRANDCHILDREN? From what I`ve heard,they can be a blessing. You get to have fun with them while they`r being good and send them back to mom and dad when they`r bad. Can`t wait....I think. Once again thank you. Mr.Magoo GBYA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with you whole heartedly Mr. Magoo. I also believe the "belt or raised voice" is a lesson learned when properly used. There are abusive parents but not all punishment of that manner is abusive...by far, most is not. Great write...nice to see the loving of children, particularly by fathers...don't see enough from that aspect. Be sure your kids, boys & girls know they can hug and kiss their dad, anytime, anywhere, in front of anyone. Surprising how many don't know that. Walk easy, write on... jwesley |
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Denise
Moderator
Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
This is great, Mr. Magoo! I remember those days very well!! And with grandchildren, you have all the fun and hardly any of the responsibility! It's wonderful!! Denise |
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nona Member
since 2000-03-03
Posts 139Fla |
Sure enjoyed your sharing the treasured memories you are in the process of making.Although the day to day strife of raising children doen't always seem so treasured in the "heat" of the moment. One day when they are all gown up and gone you can dig them up and relive those wonderful times.Then remind them of it when their kids do the same devilish things....nona |
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Chanson Senior Member
since 2000-08-19
Posts 1559Up Creek w/Out Paddle |
As a mother of four boys, I find your poem special. Way to go, Dad ....and welcome to Passions!...chanson~ Music, tonal clear & pure, Caresses the harshest of curves. ---Song of Gesture |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
Welcome to Passions, dear one! Oh yes, you will love it here, we enjoy your company very much! Feel free to post your poetry here anytime! Wow, your first poem was very amusing to read, I know how you feel. I am seventeen now, but I was once one of those mischievious little kids. Oh, all that fun, all that play, but at night, sleep like a lamb! Excellent poem, my friend, thank you for sharing! May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
Welcome to passions....and I enjoyed reading your lovely poem....and it made me smile. wonderful entrance .... Charisma |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Once again I`d like to Thank all of you for your kind welcomes and replies. The more I read thru the poems here at Passions I see that there is alot talented writers here. And I am honored to have so many of you respond in any way to my writings. I will try and respond to all that I read and if I only respond with a "Nice Job" pleses dont undermind the quote because I do think highly of the write but cant find the words to express my thoughts. Thank You and God Bless. Mr.Magoo |
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dgvarner Member Elite
since 2000-05-13
Posts 3552High Springs, Florida |
i LOVE this! and its all true! i only have one little girl right now, she'll be 3 in june...but WOW! what a little bullet she can be!! lol but when shes sleeping....oh thats just so wonderful to see her little peaceful cherubic face... thanks for sharing this little gem with us.. hugs, g "i was thinkin' if you were lonely maybe we could leave here and no one would know at least not to where we would think so..." |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
dg, How true that is...I heard so much about the 2`s but I truly think that it should be the terrible 3`s or perhaps 4`s? No matter the age they are still the most precious gift one can recieve. Thank you for kind input. Mr.Magoo GBYA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
That was the happiest time in my life when my children were small..they grow up so fast...i enjoyed your words mr magoo.. ~V~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wandering Member
since 2001-01-21
Posts 92 |
this was a very tender and heartwarming poem..thanks for sharing it with us lost in thought, found in words. wanderer |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Wonderfully done, Mr. Magoo. Childlike yet right on serious as well. Enjoyed the read. Powerful message. Thanks for the blessing, too. Say it's national 'hug day' consider yourself hugged for caring about the children and the parents who raise them. |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
Mr. Magoo, I can see you love children, very well said. Beautiful poem. |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Magoo, you had me in a tear at the end of your poem as your writing here has touched my heart... *~coco~* |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
I am so suprised at the warmth and kindness that eveyone has shared here. I can see how this site would inspire one to put his or hers poetic cap on and continue to write. Thank each and every one of you for your kind responses. Mr.Magoo GBYA [This message has been edited by Mr.Magoo (edited 01-22-2001).] |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
Hi Mr. Magoo, Wonderful read and so true, no matter what they are our future and how we treat them will be how they treat those after them, welcome to passions very nice to have you. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Mother_Earth Senior Member
since 2000-11-20
Posts 13701/2 year Texas & 1/2 year Michigan |
Mr. Magoo: this is a beautiful poem about the little darlings. If only we parents can remember the look of their sleeping faces when they are awake and full of it! Too soon they grow up and leave and start the process all over again. I love your words and welcome to Passions and hope to see a lot more from you, Hugs, ME |
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AniKay83 Member
since 2000-06-28
Posts 388Missing Since 1999 |
Welcome to Passion, Mister!!! What a way to enter. I must say I was giggling and grwling with remembrance, cuz although I'm still somewhat a child myself, I remember my friends six little devils (has anyone seen Bebe's Kids?!) tearing around my ankles... *sigh* I think I'm gonna go visit my friend. "Hearts will become practical when they make them unbreakable" ~The Wizard of Oz Much love all, Krissie |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Well said Mr Magoo! Deb |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Thank you all for taking the time to read. I look forward to reading your work as well. God Bless You All. Mr.Magoo |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
A complete transformation occurs the minute the kids fall asleep....this was so precious. Welcome to Passions, Mr. Magoo! |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
o yeah well my littlest one woke up this morning climbed outta the crib and broke my glasses sniff but yuh he wasnt asleep so you got me there |
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dragonpoe Senior Member
since 2000-11-12
Posts 608Palm Bay, Florida |
Very cute, and as a mom, I feel the same thing. With the word, I am mighty, with the pen I am free.. dragonpoe |
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Mr.Magoo Member
since 2001-01-20
Posts 104 |
Elizabeth,Wayoutwalt and Dragon, Thank you very much for responding to my work. I would also like to thank everyone here at Passion for such a warm welcome. I look forward to reading yours as well. God Bless You All Mr.Magoo |
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