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catalinamoon

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-03

Posts 9543
The Shores of Alone

0 posted 2001-01-20 01:46 PM

Yesterday you smiled at me
and the sunlight glistened
on the greenest grass, and the dew kissed rose.
The stars sparkled
from within a silky night
as the lush full moon appeared
over a flawless horizon.

Yesterday you held me
within your warmest embrace,
sheltering me from the harsh reality
of a loveless life.
The painful void within my heart
was filled to overflowing
and I was happy.

Yesterday you called me to your side
and I came
across miles and obstacles
near insurmountable.
Over years of absence forgotten
I traveled
in a haze of undeniable love.

And today you took it back
all of it.
And left me
with nothing
but a knife
inserted directly through
my now hollow heart.

Victoria

Member Ascendant

since 2000-08-12

Posts 5869

1 posted 2001-01-20 01:50 PM

Loved it Sandra..nicely done hon..one of my favorites..HUGS

~V~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

Denise

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-08-22

Posts 22648

2 posted 2001-01-20 01:52 PM

Very very sad. Great expression of a deeply felt pain.

Denise

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

3 posted 2001-01-20 02:00 PM

Very sad ...indeed.
penned with your heart, well done.

((warm hugs))
Charisma

athena4
Senior Member

since 2000-12-10

Posts 622

4 posted 2001-01-20 06:44 PM

Catalina,
So sad, so beautiful. Hold on to the yesterdays, but don't lose hope of the tomorrows...
Love, Elise

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

5 posted 2001-01-25 01:18 PM

Beautiful... and so very sad.

Sven

Member Laureate

since 1999-11-23

Posts 14937
East Lansing, MI USA

6 posted 2001-01-25 01:23 PM

Sandra, you know that I felt this one. . .

Excellent. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

7 posted 2002-03-30 05:02 PM

(tears fall down my cheeks) Oh Sandra, this is sooooooo heartbreaking, my heart goes out to you and I hope tomorrow will come soon to you and every today and yesterday from here on in will be filled with true love you deserve so much and love will pull the knife out of you and fill it with a bouquet of roses! (big hugggsssss) My heart goes out to you, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sandra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

8 posted 2003-01-27 11:23 AM

it's strange the way they do that, huh?

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